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The Mage's Apprentice (Tales of Omorbia - Book I)

The Mage's Apprentice (Tales of Omorbia - Book I)

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Stephanie Wilson By swilson4995 Updated Aug 21, 2015

Valoru is a young boy with a mysterious past and an even more mysterious guardian. He is destined to become a great Mage, but when he meets Favola, a boy with wild hair and a wilder nature, he is ready to throw it all away for their secret shared world.

But then the two children meet a third: Yafoya, a strange little girl who was raised by unicorns and has deer antlers growing from her head. With the addition of this new friend, Fav and Val's friendship changes in ways they could never have imagined.

As the trio embark on a dangerous game together of chasing monsters, Val has to make a choice between his friends and his future. Will he choose to be true to those he loves most? Or will he choose his guardian and his destiny?

Note: Some names and terms in this story are written in a conlang called Tree. You can find out more about the language at:

Carolinepeckham Carolinepeckham Jul 13, 2015
Wow great start I'm really intrigued and what a cliffhanger to end on! Can't wait to read more :)
CateHuntWrites CateHuntWrites Jun 12, 2015
I might have said something like, "...before darkness took over..." or "before darkness flooded his eyes..." But I love how the story jumps right into the conflict, but leaves questions to be answered. It feels so exciting and mysterious.
SanjayArora1 SanjayArora1 May 04, 2015
your this book seems to me much better written than robonomics . its of different level and genre
CJOBrien CJOBrien Jan 18, 2015
aahhhh......a young merlin we have it seems........another good chapter.
CJOBrien CJOBrien Jan 18, 2015
thought I would give this one a try after reading your other one and WOW......what a great first chapter. Nice work.
Smileyface55 Smileyface55 Nov 24, 2014
                              Still reading~