Murdered with love

Murdered with love

150 Reads 3 Votes 1 Part Story
Malissa By ilovejeremy Updated Jan 27, 2011

Mindalissa is abanoned at a club and runs away but gets kidnapped and almost rapped read more?

me2you804 me2you804 Jan 27, 2011
Good concept for a story and your spelling is good. I'm gonna send you a PM with some comments on your story as I feel you need to clarify some points so that your readers don't get misconceptions.
daydreamer1977 daydreamer1977 Jan 27, 2011
Hi, I have read this and will be sending you a PM too.
                              
                              I do like the general idea here, and I found no errors in spelling and grammar.  Good job there.
                              
                              Sarah.
                              
                              
Nihar125 Nihar125 Jan 27, 2011
Hey! This is really good, are u a new writer on wattpad? 
                              Can u come check out my story, What Happens Now? And tell me what you think?
                              http://www.wattpad.com/797342-what-happens-now