Fate Hurts

Fate Hurts

165 Reads 8 Votes 2 Part Story
Claire Borzoni:) By WeirdClaire Updated Mar 09, 2012

Elise's pack and parents died when she was young, and her and her brother were the only ones who survived. They moved across the country to escape their past, and Elise finds her mate to be the Alpha's son, Tristan. He painfully rejects her, and Elise leaves for two years. Two terrible years. Now Tristan has found her, and she must face her mate.

  • dead
  • fate
  • hurts
  • love
  • mate
  • parents
  • rejected
HelloHollyKitty HelloHollyKitty Feb 27, 2012
I have to say, I don't read stories like this... BUT, I really enjoyed this. Not something I was expecting to like, but yet I did. *claps* I actually really liked it!!! :)
WeirdClaire WeirdClaire Feb 27, 2012
@Esana_Bridges Thank you for helping me with my grammar. And it's kind of chosen ahead of time by fate that they are mates, it isn't really their choice. I need to declare that a bit more. Thank you!
- - Feb 27, 2012
I love stuff like this! Poor Elise! I feel bad that he was so mean to her. :/ I really hope you continue the story!
UnicornsAreCool47 UnicornsAreCool47 Feb 27, 2012
I want to chuck a brick at Tristan for being a jerk. Otherwise, this really "sets the scene" well and moves at a nice pace; not too slow, not too fast. Fabulous job in spelling! Bravo! <3
                              
                              ~Jenna
WeirdClaire WeirdClaire Feb 27, 2012
@LoHeartsYou Thank you! That means so much. I'll go read yours now. :)