Silent Wishes

Silent Wishes

1.5K Reads 134 Votes 5 Part Story
LuckyCharm1 By LuckyCharm1 Updated Aug 08, 2012

Cloud Krystal Baker has what everyone else would think as "the perfect life" She has rich famous parents and lives in a huge house. But no one sees it. She is trapped and severly unhappy. Her parents have no time for her and for years she has been bugged and embarrassed by reporters. When she suddenly finds someone like her who is looking for a way out and who doesn't just like her for her fame they decide to do something about it.

  • boy
  • fame
  • famous
  • forever
  • girl
  • hope
  • love
  • meebz1
  • party
  • runaway
  • sad
  • teen
  • trapped
ComfortablyPlump ComfortablyPlump Apr 30, 2012
Awww this was actually kinda sad.... :( I wouldn't necessarily call Cloud ungrateful if you think about her situation in a certain way... I hope she does get that one friend she's yearning for. But in the end, this is an excellent start, I am very intrigued. On to the next chapter!!!!
ch4rmed ch4rmed Apr 29, 2012
Nice intro into Clouds' life. Lets us understand a little bit about her before we actually dive into the story. She seems rather lonely ): must be hard to find real friends in her situation. 
                              
                              PS. I love her name :3
maddiee_xoxo maddiee_xoxo Apr 28, 2012
Love this book already! Can't wait to read on! Interesting choice of names haha ;)
ErinWeate ErinWeate Apr 27, 2012
I love your book cover and your description are AMAZING! its kinda sad with the whole I just want a friend thing but I think it works with the way you structured it. really good job.
Infatuated Infatuated Apr 27, 2012
Usually I don't like the whole "Hey I'm... my life..." but for a prologue you seemed to introduced everything very well. Good job:)
cowgirl14kms cowgirl14kms Apr 27, 2012
I love the detail, style, and descriptions. Your character has a unique strong voice that makes you feel instantly connected with her!! voted