Bitten

Bitten

159 Reads 2 Votes 3 Part Story
Elena By Fantasy_Freak Updated Aug 25, 2012

Nina Jones was just an average girl whose parents got divorced. She goes back to school and meets a new student, Ashley. Ashley might seem normal but normal is not the word for it. Nina meets a brooding Ian and falls for him right away. Little does she know that he's a vampire.What will happen when Ian's long lost brother,Paul, comes back into his life. How will Ashley plot to kill all vampires? How will Nina save everyone she loves while saving herself?

  • ashley
  • bitten
  • ian
  • nina
Onceagoatbitme Onceagoatbitme Jun 10, 2012
Amazing! I LUV it! I'm totally hooked,can't wait to see what is going to happen next! :)
Fantasy_Freak Fantasy_Freak Mar 16, 2012
Yeah it was off of word and the spaces wouldnt go away :p Thanks
MutantBirdFreak MutantBirdFreak Mar 10, 2012
Amazing, I'm hooked.
                              But you have a lot of spaces in between paragraphs. Was this in a word document?
                              Haha, but I loved it either way!
                              <3