Divided Waters: My Hearts Desire

18 Part Story 3.4K Reads 118 Votes
Christin McClatchie By CtoriaNoel Updated 3 years ago
The daughter of the Mermaid Queen, and Selkie King Amiria is expected to be of the sea. When she finds her home on land, what will she do. Bound by promises, and an unwanted Destiny she finds her way through life, and love. Finding her place for all of eternity.
Where did you get the name Amiria from? ;D That's my name and I wasn't expecting it to appear in the story!
Was that a poem or a prophecy of some sort? I like it, it's really hard for me to write stuff like that. I noticed that you misspelled prologue. It's 'prologue' not 'prologe' Just thought that you should know. :)
Unusual but a very well written poem, hopefully you link this later on in the story
This poem is absolutely beautiful! I'm assuming it has to do with the story  intrigued.
A very different start to a story... Nothing I've ever seem before. Love it's uniqueness and it's imagery. Very good start. Loved it!
I liked your 'prologue'? is this the prologue? It had a nice way of attracting readers. I definitely voted and added it to my library because I love fantasy stuff like this. Your descriptions are good. :)