Divided Waters: My Hearts Desire

Divided Waters: My Hearts Desire

3.4K Reads 118 Votes 18 Part Story
Christin McClatchie By CtoriaNoel Updated Jun 29, 2012

The daughter of the Mermaid Queen, and Selkie King Amiria is expected to be of the sea. When she finds her home on land, what will she do. Bound by promises, and an unwanted Destiny she finds her way through life, and love. Finding her place for all of eternity.

x0reox x0reox Mar 16, 2013
Where did you get the name Amiria from? ;D That's my name and I wasn't expecting it to appear in the story!
CtoriaNoel CtoriaNoel Jun 22, 2012
@janefoxx haha thanks and that doesn't surprise me spelling is my weakest area. I am having to rely on spell check a lot. and even then I do not always catch everything. It is a little poetry, a little prophecy. But to be honest I think this will be one of the things that changes in the next draft.
janefoxx janefoxx Jun 22, 2012
Was that a poem or a prophecy of some sort? I like it, it's really hard for me to write stuff like that. I noticed that you misspelled prologue. It's 'prologue' not 'prologe' Just thought that you should know. :)
LondonGinger LondonGinger Mar 31, 2012
Unusual but a very well written poem, hopefully you link this later on in the story
NicoletteAndrews NicoletteAndrews Mar 30, 2012
This poem is absolutely beautiful! I'm assuming it has to do with the story  intrigued.
NessieMarie NessieMarie Mar 30, 2012
A very different start to a story... Nothing I've ever seem before. Love it's uniqueness and it's imagery. Very good start. Loved it!