A Viking's Rage

A Viking's Rage

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H.H. Cook By heather_cooki Completed

[A WATTPAD FEATURED STORY]

❝Not soon after she could feel his fingers caressing her scars, she closed her eyes.
  
  I shall kill whoever made these marks on your body," His lips kissing the numb flesh.
  
  For a painful moment, Noah came to her mind.
  
  "I have to kill him." She said, staring into the fire as she spoke.❞
  
    
    
  She was nothing more than a slave, in a world ruled by wicked men....
    A story of fate, revenge, and eventually love.
    
  
  
  
  
    
    
    A Viking's Rage, Book I
    Copyright ©2013  ©2017
    H.H.Cook
    
    ® All rights reserved. No part of this publication may be reproduced.
    
    Some mature content.

  • action
  • adventure
  • danes
  • denmark
  • england
  • epic
  • fiction
  • heroine
  • history
  • legend
  • love
  • norse
  • pagan
  • romance
  • scandinavia
  • swords
  • viking
  • vikings
  • war
  • wattys2017
Excellent description, I wanted to throw up. Ugh! She can't get a break!
It becomes confusing here on what women they are grabbing. Adding some insight on how the main character feels mentally would add some intensity to the story.
A comment on how the slap physically felt would add some connection.
Great! I love the immediate emotional attachment to the characters. I already hate Hemming.
tom_tommi tom_tommi Oct 06, 2014
I like how you built the first scene up... could use a bit more description but I still got a good picture. :)