What Happened To Forever?

What Happened To Forever?

12 Part Story 5.2K Reads 187 Votes
NaughtyAuti By NaughtyAuti Completed

Many people say that everything has a happy ending, I'm sure you've heard it. Everything happens for a reason, right? Well, if that's true then what is the reason for heartbreak? People say it teaches you a lesson, but what is it really teaching you? Not to trust people? That's pretty ridiculous. Now whenever we meet someone, we can't trust them because of one little person and their huge effect on our life. Well, this is my story of how I was in love, broken hearted, depressed, and healed. Let's just say, not all stories end in, "happily ever after."

moonchic moonchic Jun 16, 2012 04:56PM
Lol, she seems like the cute little valley girl you see in movies! Like it! Voted!
galnextdoor galnextdoor Jun 16, 2012 04:51PM
hey there.. great so far..
                              its cute and i like how your main character tyler is bad ass yet nice..i like :)
EKShortstories EKShortstories Jun 14, 2012 05:00PM
Awww, this was good, I enjoyed it!  It sounds familiar to other stories, but I have a feeling it has a few more twists than others ;) Voted!
There was a lot of dialogue, but the large paragraphs made up for it. The storyline is good. Hardly any mistakes and was an easy read.
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LindseyRay LindseyRay Jun 14, 2012 03:35AM
you have the most amazing cast ever!!! :D perfect characters to play the parts!!!
xxkathyxx xxkathyxx Jun 12, 2012 09:29AM
Cool plot and interesting...characters. Nice prologue. Your writing style is ecellent because I saw no errors and it was readable. keep it up:P