Players Been Tamed.

Players Been Tamed.

21.9K Reads 263 Votes 14 Part Story
Kim By AmoreLove413 Updated Apr 25, 2015

When Melanie Daniels starts crushing on delicious player Zeke Heywood, she can't help but notice there's a particular girl also stirring for his affection. Will Melanie beat the odds and change this bad boy? Or is she going to crash and burn like the others?

Nonbeliever Nonbeliever Apr 11, 2011
I have to admit, player stories don't really interest me, but so far, this is pretty good :) *voted*
writer_122 writer_122 Apr 06, 2011
You need to add new paragraphs for new dialogue sometimes, and some of the sentences seemed rushed, but I really did love the story so far! I was only going to read the 1st page, but I kept going :)
- - Apr 06, 2011
normally i'm not into romances but i really like this so far :) good work!
xMuzikPastax xMuzikPastax Apr 06, 2011
Sorry, I never got around to reading this like you asked like a month ago, haha.
                              My input is that it's pretty fast-paced and there's not much character development going one with Melanie. 
                              It's still promising and good. And the fast-paced works for an internet story. 
MissRaRa MissRaRa Apr 05, 2011
This is really good
                              but
                              when people talk , you use present tense, yet the rest of the story is in past tense.
                              other than that it's really good.
octoberiswild octoberiswild Apr 05, 2011
ohh this was an epic start it made me read more lol
                              
                              sorry for the late comment! please check out mine in return if you haven't done so yet :)
                              *voted!*