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Players Been Tamed.

Players Been Tamed.

22K Reads 263 Votes 14 Part Story
Kim By AmoreLove413 Updated Apr 25, 2015

When Melanie Daniels starts crushing on delicious player Zeke Heywood, she can't help but notice there's a particular girl also stirring for his affection. Will Melanie beat the odds and change this bad boy? Or is she going to crash and burn like the others?

SavyJParker SavyJParker Mar 10, 2011
Zeke is such a jerk, but you wrote that well. Nice work Very convincing. 
PollardWharly PollardWharly Mar 01, 2011
@AmoreLove413 Haha, np. Perhaps I misinterpreted how you wrote Zeke's thoughts. If comical is what you were aiming at, you nailed it, no doubt. Anyway, i find the best judge of writing is the writer themselves. So if you like it, I would def not change a thing.  :)
Raaawwrrrr Raaawwrrrr Feb 28, 2011
Few spelling mistakes but it's all good in the hood :D
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Booxzzaregr8 Booxzzaregr8 Jan 31, 2011
so hey just wondering when u were going to update cuz im sitting here WAITINGGG! this is too good and i neeed you to update like riiight now! :(