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Emerald Eyes (On Hold)

Emerald Eyes (On Hold)

34.9K Reads 984 Votes 22 Part Story
Taylor Monét By taylormonet Updated Feb 22, 2014

Claire Collins and her bestfriend Brandon Roberts do everything together and have since they were in fourth grade. As an only child, she thinks of him as a brother. Or she used to. She cannot seem to control her thoughts about him lately. He IS one of the cutest guys at school. Although she knows that she is slowly falling for him, she seems determined to prove to everyone that shes not. Will Claire go to drastic measures to prove this? What ever happens, there are sure to be a few broken hearts along the way.

tianajade tianajade Apr 17, 2011
A good beginning; I enjoyed reading that. Your descriptions are good, almost too the point where I can picture everything in my head. There were a few grammar errors, but they can be easily fixed by re-reading it (: Your characters are realistic as well. Nice work, and keep writing!
kAyy89 kAyy89 Apr 01, 2011
So far, I like it! The descriptions are imaginable and its well written. Good work!
SVcrazy SVcrazy Mar 17, 2011
beautiful descriptions! Love everything! It really sucked me in! Keep it up!!! 
taylormonet taylormonet Mar 10, 2011
@perfectMistake Haha yay! I'm glad you like it!!! Yes I read it! It's amazing! xD Can't wait until the next upload!!!
perfectMistake perfectMistake Mar 10, 2011
This is excellent :D I love these types of stories, I'm working on one kind of like this !
MrsRobsessed MrsRobsessed Mar 09, 2011
Great work! You're a really good writer. I will now continue on to the next chapter... [=
                              Oh, and I'll be commenting on every chapter I read :D