Little Miss Perfect?

Little Miss Perfect?

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Kally By planetary-nebula Completed

I remember years ago when a boy at school had called me Little Miss Perfect. At the time, I had stuck my tongue out at him. Now, thinking back to those days,  I realize that he was speaking the truth: I was  girl with the rich, celebrity parents. The girl who didn't necessarily have the looks, but had the happiness to make up for it. We were the family who lived in a house that closely  resembled the Sylvanian family doll houses. Then it all crashed down, like lighting, like a storm...

Santana's childhood is very different compared to her adolescence.  After being through everything that a teenage girl should never face, all her past memories of sweet days are replaced with shattered and lonely nightmares.  And after one devastating truth, she decides that she can't face it anymore.  What does she need?  A new start, away from it all...

Wow! English is my second! That's awesome what languages do you speak? I speak Portuguese
I don't want to be spelling police or whatever, but I cracked up when I read "barley" instead of "barely"
EverySecondCounts EverySecondCounts Jan 04, 2015
@purpleberry1221 That would be a one in the life time oppotunity..Yes I really love to be your friend (≧∇≦)/
tia111 tia111 Jul 14, 2014
The plague description was a really nice touch, it gives the reader knowledge of really how much she hates her mother. I liked that a lot.
tia111 tia111 Jul 14, 2014
Really good so far!! It has a nice hook. It gets the readers attention! Well done(: