Locked in Marriage 3: Forever After

Locked in Marriage 3: Forever After

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Katherine By Nox_Floo Completed

Twenty years after their marriage, Colton and Kayla Manning are going through their trial separation. Their four children, Charlotte, Ryder, Mikey, and Katie, are caught in the middle of it and none of them know what to do. Both Kayla and Colton want to fight for their marriage, but neither is willing to compromise for the other. Will they be able to salvage their marriage and celebrate their 20th wedding anniversary or will it crumble around them just like people have been predicting?

JoanneNg JoanneNg Nov 05, 2014
Hi, a little inconsistent at this part. Your previous chapter states that Mikey is the youngest one but in this chapter, you wrote that Katie is the youngest.. Perhaps when you edit it, you can also change the order.
shirlw shirlw Sep 07, 2014
I have to stand up for Colton just wee bit here.....I think Kayla needs to be more assertive in the relationship.....like the time she started yelling at him and got really angry....that got his attention!!  Fight or flight....they both automatically find wings!!!
pelimar pelimar Feb 03, 2014
He wants to save the marriage but he didn't do anything about it
pelimar pelimar Feb 03, 2014
No not cheering that is bad how they have four kids if they not get along for so many years
rhemajay rhemajay Jan 26, 2014
Please don't let him cheat or write that he had already cheated.  Let them find a way to work it out and get back together.
babymomo25 babymomo25 Jan 17, 2014
plssss update i want them back together  what i don't get is they can't stand each other then how did they make 4 kids? its supper good but plsssssss don't write that he did cheat it Will kill me !!!! love this boookkkk!!! ahhhhhhhh