Retired Bad Boy (sequel to MBBF) ON HOLD

Retired Bad Boy (sequel to MBBF) ON HOLD

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Daniele Foremsky By purplefaerie Updated Mar 11, 2013

Retired Bad Boy (changed from falling for the waitress) Having been in a bad relationship before, Melody is leery when it comes to guys. But when she sees Jeraud for the first time in the restaurant, she feels that she has to get to know him. Jeraud is determined not to fall in the tricks of any female, but Melody is different from any other girl he has been with. He wants her and he'll stop at nothing to get her. Only problem, Johnny would kill anybody who stood in his way of getting his ex back. Will Jeraud win the girl, or will Johnny stop him?

CandaceButterfield CandaceButterfield Aug 07, 2012
dani u need to finish this so i can read it plz cuz u love me hahahaha loves u :)
purplefaerie purplefaerie May 01, 2011
@JessicaBurt Lol. Well if little miss somebody would help me lol XP I have to come up with an idea that doesn't totally suck. You'll be the first one to know when im about to post it. Luv ya to
JessicaBurt JessicaBurt Apr 26, 2011
dddddddaaaaaaaannnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i will Start bugging u if u don't Upload more or i will SPAM Ur comments lol and Yes the capitalization is werd (iPods fault Not Mine ) lol Luv ya grl
JessicaBurt JessicaBurt Apr 26, 2011
dddddddaaaaaaaannnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii i will Start bugging u if u don't Upload more or i will SPAM Ur comments lol and Yes the capitalization is werd (iPods fault Not Mine ) lol Luv ya grl
purplefaerie purplefaerie Feb 01, 2011
@kaysi217 ah! lol ok thanks for pointing that out and thank you :D
kaysi217 kaysi217 Feb 01, 2011
hey. i really like the first chapter and I think that you should continue. But I wanted to point out that in a few parts, you had Ivory's name as Natalie. keep up the great work