300 years ago a man saved our village.
He demanded a girl as payment: one every moon until he stopped returning their bodies.
Two days ago another was returned.
I don't know who or what he is or why he wants these girls.
All I know is...I'm next.
Ps I love the whole bat thing it makes me happy inside that and I fangirl like every five minutes
I love the uniqueness to this. Fabulous writing by the way<3
This world you have created is so dark but vivid, I can see it in my mind clearly. Awesome job!!! <3
I think it could be a really good story plot! -- Just make sure to put more twists into it. ;)
I Already know I'm going to like reading this story.Even though I love werewolf stories I'm really into this one.This is like the best prologue I read yet.
The short summary was scary as hell btw haha great work on that!
Hmm this is interesting, the beginning was too dramatic, but that's just me...and I don't really like a third person narrative, but you did great <3
To be frank, I am not into vampires but your descriptions were immaculate. You really know how to create a brill hook.