Tina and Harry's parents were killed by the dark lord. Harry goes to live with his muggle cousins and Tina goes to live in Hogwarts. But on her 11th birthday something horrible happens. If you want to find out what read this book.
this is really good, you just need to use that enter button more. But otherwise, AMAZE-TASTC START!
Awesome! I may steal your idea though. I'll mention your story though. It's too cool NOT to be mentioned.
You said its your second language but your better then others I know who that is there second! Good job!
@JamieJohnson370 yaay!! But I wrote this chapter a long time ago and now I've actually improved in English so... I'm on level B2 (almost on C1) (if you know what that is) :-)
To say that you said english is ur second language, you did brilliant. I think I only found 2 spelling mistakes, if it was me I would of done 10000000 mistakes lol
This is AWESOME and I've only read the first chapter!!!! Its sooo good and I REALLY, REALLY hope that you update soon!!!! Keep up the good work!!! :)