Crazy Amusement

Crazy Amusement

13 Part Story 18.1K Reads 291 Votes
Batman By MyKissKills Updated Oct 14, 2013

Four kids go to an amusement park, expecting a day of fun. But they get anything but that.  Faced with wax figures, demons, a broken ferris wheel, and more, they're faced with unanswered questions. Who is a traitor? Who isn't? Who'll get out alive? Who won't?

_kimberly_joy _kimberly_joy Oct 17, 2013 10:59PM
I like it but write a lil more so it doesnt only have to be 1 page long :)
MyKissKills MyKissKills Aug 15, 2012 05:04PM
@Ashez55 Yeah, I really do need to work on detail xD thanks haha, that helps a lot xD I shall go and edit :3
MyKissKills MyKissKills Jul 22, 2012 07:08PM
@ASmileHidesThePain  mine still sucks. 
                                    Yours don't. 
                                    Got it?
                                    Good.
maniacalmusic maniacalmusic Jul 22, 2012 05:16PM
@MyKissKills HA, And thats why i have no votes from anyone i DONT know.? Yea i think your veiws and votes speak for itself.
maniacalmusic maniacalmusic Jul 02, 2012 06:00PM
I am seriously pissed that your writing is so much better than mine *Smh* Loved it!!
maddy_k14 maddy_k14 Jun 23, 2012 01:01AM
@mykisskills are you continuing the story because It's REALLY GOOD :)