The Unknown (under "construction")

The Unknown (under "construction")

292 Reads 4 Votes 2 Part Story
Ash By princessofnight Updated Mar 20, 2010

A very vague story that I tried to make, due to this I am trying my best to fix it. I'm thinking about making The Unknown be the series, or I dunno but it's on hold.

princessofnight princessofnight Feb 14, 2011
@sjmoyer: thank u (: ya ill try to keep my grammar in check im not thee best with grammar lol
sjmoyer sjmoyer Feb 14, 2011
Interesting start here.  I will have to agree with an earlier comment about watching your tenses.  (been there)  I look forward to seeing more.
princessofnight princessofnight Apr 23, 2010
@Celestial [= thanks, yea once I get out of this block and back on track, I'll post a new chapter with that stuff. thankfully I have all the characters done for this story so......sooner or later, I'll get something up. 
                              thanks for commenting [= and glad you're interested 
Celestial Celestial Apr 22, 2010
Yea i really like the beginning and i really want to read more it sounds so interesting ( 3
                              Im sure in the next chapter all the descriptions of the characters will be revealed and it will be great im looking foward to it.
princessofnight princessofnight Apr 18, 2010
@BFreel_ hahaha [x thanks 
                              okay okay, yeaaa i know i really need to.....
                              ahaahahhaha 
CreatingBalance_ CreatingBalance_ Apr 18, 2010
oooh, this is very interesting. 
                              You should write more, since im really eager to read whats going on here. I really want to know who this character is and whats her deal with this Harry person...