A very vague story that I tried to make, due to this I am trying my best to fix it. I'm thinking about making The Unknown be the series, or I dunno but it's on hold.
@sjmoyer: thank u (: ya ill try to keep my grammar in check im not thee best with grammar lol
Interesting start here. I will have to agree with an earlier comment about watching your tenses. (been there) I look forward to seeing more.
@Celestial [= thanks, yea once I get out of this block and back on track, I'll post a new chapter with that stuff. thankfully I have all the characters done for this story so......sooner or later, I'll get something up.
thanks for commenting [= and glad you're interested
Yea i really like the beginning and i really want to read more it sounds so interesting ( 3
Im sure in the next chapter all the descriptions of the characters will be revealed and it will be great im looking foward to it.
@BFreel_ hahaha [x thanks
okay okay, yeaaa i know i really need to.....
oooh, this is very interesting.
You should write more, since im really eager to read whats going on here. I really want to know who this character is and whats her deal with this Harry person...