Overshot - Closing

Overshot - Closing

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BT By Riprish Updated Mar 29

Army Specialist Bobby Ty considers her deployment to be all fun and games. That is, until an in-development armor prototype goes missing and she's accused of stealing it. No matter her protests of innocence, Ty's leadership hangs her out to dry with twenty-four-hour duty. It gets even harder to plead her case when the missing prototype ends up on her wrist hours later. To make things even worse, her base is attacked by unknown assailants. During the indirect fire, as Ty flees to safety, she slips and faints into a spaceship hidden in a timely open crevice. 

When she wakes up, she finds herself on a new planet where a new species hold dominance.
      
A species that does not like her claim to humanity. Who states Earth is a creation believed by fools. Who go so far as o denounce her sanity and lock her up. 
      
In the midst of her confusion, a Universe-wide war threatens to either be her salvation or her death. It is here in battle that Ty realizes she is more than a lost space traveler with unfortunate luck. There's a bigger strategy at play, one millenniums in the making, where the fate of Earth and the Universe rests on the shoulders of Bobbie Ty, a human out of time, and that strange armor prototype with a mind of its own.

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squirrelg squirrelg May 18
Congrats on the feature! This is a really well-written and intriguing start
Several7s Several7s May 24, 2017
 #NBR
                              "...I had sought out a restroom,  a real restroom[,] after sweating in my body armor all day."
                              Because "a real restroom" is an extra modifier it's an appositive and therefore should be enclosed in commas, which was why I added one.
I personally love the story overshot the way it is and you're going to tell me they still have more storyline on oversight Bring It On.!
redtoadmedia redtoadmedia May 26, 2017
 #NBR why is this significant? "We were a male and female duo, alone in broad daylight." Can you expand that or give me as the reader  more  information?
ShaunPierre ShaunPierre Jun 28, 2017
Great introduction. From the very beginning my anticipation was piqued to know what would happen next.
RimanEllis RimanEllis May 22, 2017
 #NBR I wasn't sure I was reading about the same person. Mann seems like a confusing character...should I like him or not? Hmm