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CURRENTLY UNDER MAJOR EDITING DONT READ YET!!! Prowl

CURRENTLY UNDER MAJOR EDITING DONT READ YET!!! Prowl

16.8K Reads 211 Votes 27 Part Story
tweety2010 By tweety2010 Updated Apr 25, 2013

Ronnie and her little sister Rain have an abusive father. It all started after their mom never came back from a buisness trip. They haven't heard from her since, it was like she disappeared. Their father tried to cope with the loss of his wife and became a drunken heartbroken father. He began to abuse his loving daughters everyday.But when Ronnie meets a boy thats her age and that she might like, does he have a secret that she doesnt know about?....things may start to come up and secrets are revealed in this one of a kind adventure.

sockmonkey39793 sockmonkey39793 Jan 23, 2012
Wow that's intense haha I hate abusive people he can go die in a hole
Devaglo Devaglo Jan 22, 2012
It's quite short for a chapter and needs some minor editing like in Capitalizing certain letters. The plot is interesting though and the story is quite entertaining to say the least. Good read. ^^
WrongWay WrongWay Nov 23, 2011
This is really good! i like it!(:
                              You just need a little bit of editing and then it would make it better(:
tweety2010 tweety2010 Nov 19, 2011
@Yeahbabyyeah oh and i forgot to mention, if you are not interested in this story at all, if you would like to, you could check out my other two stories, i recommend Love Is Full Of Surprises! :)
tweety2010 tweety2010 Nov 19, 2011
@Yeahbabyyeah thank you for reading :) and the whole story is definitly not abusive, only the first few chapters. I promise! thank you though for taking some time to read my story though! :D
tweety2010 tweety2010 Oct 23, 2011
@Cathysummers Thank you. i will improve my grammer. thanks for commenting too! :D