fAt girl

fAt girl

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Beatrice Blackmore By Broken_girl Updated Jul 23, 2016

Ava is overweight, she has no friends and is bullied because of her weight. All she wants is to be accepted at school, one day Ava's dad is injured in a car accident and Ava's world comes crashing down. The bullying gets worse and she is being pushed to her breaking point.

- - Jun 13
Honey you don't need a boyfriend to feel complete. If they don't notice how special you are then that's their loss. You can make it without a guy in your life, trust me I've done it for the longest😌.
- - Jun 13
Just don't do the work, stop talking to her and hanging around her. You're letting these people take advantage of you, you gotta put your foot down, and tell these people that they can't make you do anything you don't want to. You don't owe them anything.
Ditch Maddie and find someone else. It might be had by they're none than one fake one
- - Jun 13
Then she's not your friend stop hanging around her, it's better to be by yourself, then to be surrounded by fake people.
Cheesenuggets67 Cheesenuggets67 Jul 24, 2016
Wait, I'm confused in something. Is it really a one story house, or a two story house? Because later on in the story it involves her going upstairs to her room...
                              
                              I don't know how it's possible to go upstairs on a one story house..
celebritystxtus celebritystxtus Oct 18, 2013
You're a REALLY good writer! I really hope I don't annoy you by asking this, but can you please read my stories and tell me what you think? Thanks! It'd mean a lot, please vote, read, and tell me what you think I did good and what I should improve on! :)