fAt girl

fAt girl

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Beatrice Blackmore By Broken_girl Updated Jul 23

Ava is overweight, she has no friends and is bullied because of her weight. All she wants is to be accepted at school, one day Ava's dad is injured in a car accident and Ava's world comes crashing down. The bullying gets worse and she is being pushed to her breaking point.

Wait, I'm confused in something. Is it really a one story house, or a two story house? Because later on in the story it involves her going upstairs to her room...
                              
                              I don't know how it's possible to go upstairs on a one story house..
celebritystxtus celebritystxtus Oct 18, 2013
You're a REALLY good writer! I really hope I don't annoy you by asking this, but can you please read my stories and tell me what you think? Thanks! It'd mean a lot, please vote, read, and tell me what you think I did good and what I should improve on! :)
Broken_girl Broken_girl Feb 25, 2012
@LukeMahserjian-Smith aww why thanks :) that made my day. thanks for the support. Please continue reading and enjoy :)