The Last Kiss Goodbye

The Last Kiss Goodbye

56.7K Reads 420 Votes 28 Part Story
Britney By Britney2758 Completed

This story is about a girl that feels unloved and unwanted by her friends and family. She is just a very depressed girl. Well before long she meets this guy named Damon. . . She falls in love with Damon. Her life is prefect! Then something tragic happens to Damon. Jaylin(the main character) is a train wreck! Jaylin is about to kill herself becasue shes so unhappy but right before shes does, something happens. . .

Britney2758 Britney2758 Mar 19, 2013
@sammy2978 I have made a second book go to my page it is the only other book i have on here.  it isnt finished but i have a sequal
GabyJauregui GabyJauregui Jan 07, 2012
Definitely captured my attention very good start. Maybe a little to forward and abrupt but great nonetheless
Folona Folona May 20, 2011
I like how it gets into the drama and makes you want to read to see what will happen next. your grammar and spelling is pretty good since I couldn't find any obvious mistakes. This looks like its set to be a good story well done. Voted.
HeatherMcCorkle HeatherMcCorkle Mar 06, 2011
Wow. This is so powerful and well written. My heart went out to your character! Keep writing, you've got talent!
XxstephxX XxstephxX Feb 26, 2011
woah, thats really beautiful. sad, but beautiful.
                              Imma read on. Its griping, really pulls people in.
                              Steph.
Britney2758 Britney2758 Feb 14, 2011
@AddictedToVamps thank you so much!  Im glad you like it! :)