My Love Triangle Story

My Love Triangle Story

389 Reads 64 Votes 21 Part Story
MidnightMoon8888 By MidnightMoon8888 Completed

Being in love with somebody isn't always easy, and I for one know that feeling. And in this story there is a love triangle.

  • betrayal
  • confusion
  • drama
  • heartbreak
  • romance
MidnightMoon8888 MidnightMoon8888 Aug 18, 2017
So do I! 😊  It would be nice to have a best friend like that to always have my back and I'll always have hers/his🙂
SWDLOVE SWDLOVE Aug 18, 2017
So far so good! I love how you drescribe how the girl felt toward the boy!
SWDLOVE SWDLOVE Aug 18, 2017
Katy seems the best best friend anyone could have! 😊 I've always wanted a BFF that would always stay by my side
TABLEAUXVIVID TABLEAUXVIVID Feb 23, 2017
As an writer the first paragraph has always been  a good way to let the readers know how you'll begin your story. 
                              
                              Nice start! 
                              
                              I believe it should be "I(,) Rose Heart..." everything else flows nicely.