i bite back, just so you know (boyxboy)

i bite back, just so you know (boyxboy)

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Nikki By Nikjt92 Completed

two boys, two wolves. both are extremely dominant and both need to be at the top of their game. so what happens when fate throws them together in a whirlwind of intense pleasure and a sacred mating ritual is started??
 Alex wants Ryan bad and Ryan after a while doesnt seem to hate Alex, could this be a true mating or just another two broken souls?

Its good but you have to edit it. Like i should be I. and  also use inverted coma for conversation. but its amazing I love the flow. And also Ryan in my favorite name <3
theOBSCUREcryptic theOBSCUREcryptic Aug 02, 2014
You NEED an editor, you really do. You don't even know the rules of the English language.
theOBSCUREcryptic theOBSCUREcryptic Aug 02, 2014
Talking at me? Or talking *to me.  Talking to me makes more sense. Also capitalize all the singular "I's"
QTDavii QTDavii Dec 05, 2013
good chapter but this need to be edited. try and get an editor
Banshee-x Banshee-x Sep 05, 2011
I was enjoying this, but now I'm sad because I realized chapter 2 is private? :(
PassionInFlames PassionInFlames Jul 24, 2011
*Sigh* I was really enjoying this, but i don't fan very often becuase I don't like what it does to my email. The next chapter is private, so yeah. Just wanted to say good job and I'm sure this is a good story ^^