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Unexpectedly (Completed)

Unexpectedly (Completed)

129K Reads 4.6K Votes 27 Part Story
x) By slightlysuperman Completed

Breaking a heart can happen in a blink of an eye, but falling in love can happen unexpectedly.  Even.  After.  Only.  Just.  One.  Night.


MauiGirl1004 MauiGirl1004 Oct 11, 2014
I love the storyline great beginning can't wait to read more
Sarcastic_TeenX Sarcastic_TeenX Oct 10, 2014
This is an excellent start to your story! Leo seems like a nice guy and I hate the bimbo who cheated on him! To improve I suggest that you add more descriptions.  For example the smells, music etc...Your dialogue flowed well so keep up the good work :)
Southernbelle070 Southernbelle070 Oct 04, 2014
A little choppy but not bad. Leo seems like a sweet guy and his ex is a female dog. Chelsea is sweet seeming too. Very good job.
abbsw92 abbsw92 Oct 02, 2014
Great chapter! Adding this to my reading list! I can not believe that girl dumped him like that! That made me so angry lol.
dinohotty dinohotty Sep 28, 2014
I'm already in love with this story!! I'm glad he found another girl after 2 years but sad she's only visiting, I'm going to read on to see what happens amazing/wonderful so far
silbilee silbilee Apr 07, 2014
Someone's getting down to business..! Lol.. I like this more then the others. Keep up the great work. ;p