Breaking a heart can happen in a blink of an eye, but falling in love can happen unexpectedly. Even. After. Only. Just. One. Night.
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I love the storyline great beginning can't wait to read more
This is an excellent start to your story! Leo seems like a nice guy and I hate the bimbo who cheated on him! To improve I suggest that you add more descriptions. For example the smells, music etc...Your dialogue flowed well so keep up the good work :)
A little choppy but not bad. Leo seems like a sweet guy and his ex is a female dog. Chelsea is sweet seeming too. Very good job.
Great chapter! Adding this to my reading list! I can not believe that girl dumped him like that! That made me so angry lol.
I'm already in love with this story!! I'm glad he found another girl after 2 years but sad she's only visiting, I'm going to read on to see what happens amazing/wonderful so far
Someone's getting down to business..! Lol.. I like this more then the others. Keep up the great work. ;p