When I'm Gone

When I'm Gone

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Devon By DevonScott Updated May 10, 2012

Hannah Green has always relied on her friends, but when they start to drift away she finds herself alone in the world. Of course she has Cam; her best friend, but even he seems to be acting strangely around her. So she closes herself off to everyone around her, slowly loosing herself and the people she thought she could trust; she resorts to suicide. But her unfinished business doesn't allow her to move on. Invisible to almost everyone around her she watches her friends and family fall to pieces and in doing so uncovers more secrets and lies about her life than she could have ever dreamed of.

DevonScott DevonScott Dec 22, 2011
@HopelessDreamer24 Thank you, I'll fix that when I go through and edit it :D xxx
MarineLynn MarineLynn Dec 22, 2011
I wish you added a bit more emotion in it. It really didn't hook me in the beginning, but near the middle it did. I'm reading more.
DevonScott DevonScott Dec 20, 2011
@yourlilRIOT7 Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it. I love to hear comments like this it really makes my day! :D
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DevonScott DevonScott Dec 20, 2011
@SummerBreath Thank you, I really appreciate it. I'm glad you like it :D 
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yourlilRIOT7 yourlilRIOT7 Dec 20, 2011
i got goosbumps from reading this... im adding it to my library :) i like it a lott! I really want to read more and will definitly be keeping uppp. It's so sadd ): and i really really think that suicide is such an interesting/awful thing to read aboutt
DevonScott DevonScott Feb 22, 2011
@CerebralAssassin Thank you so much, If I have time I'll make sure of it :D Thanks again
                              
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