if everything goes as planned
i will publish this book
not now, maybe not even this year
it depends on how much time i need editing
i need your help;
i'll dedicate this book to criticism,
i want you guys to criticize this book
the characters,
the plot,
the way this book was written,
everything
give me your honest opinion
what did you wish to see more of
what did you want to see less of
if you could change something what would it be
i will edit this book and give it a new face