A Cold Day In Hell-ON HOLD

By carltumee

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-What happens when you find out, you can't be with the person your heart desires?- follow me on this amazing... More

ch> 1
ch>2
ch> 3
ch>4 - Dinner with the ubaid's
ch>5- awful news
ch>6
ch>7 - πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜ž
ch>8- ****
ch>9 - the talk.
ch>10 - Zeemus in the house
ch>11- Diner
ch>12- change of mind.
ch>13 - hurt
ch>14- fighting for friendship
ch>15- the rejected proposal.
ch>16 -Winning back love.
ch>17- Accident
ch>18- Apologies.
ch>19 -Grad
Ch>21 - End of lovers
ch>22 - khulaid's confession
ch>23 -A cold day in July.
ch >24- No way in hell.
ch>25 - the bitter truth.
ch>26- Greetings

ch>20- secrets out.

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By carltumee

Soundtrack;
~BEDROCK
☆ YOUNG MONEY
Confession = I really don't see anything this song has too do with this scene.
Suggest a more dramatic tone.😉
-unedited- #chaptr may change after editing.

Jawahir 's p.o.v ;

The occasion was finally over and we all returned home except for aunt ashraff who went to her house instead.
While in the car,
Saif brought out a beautiful diamond ring and showed it to my mum.
Mum nodes her head, and I couldn't figure out why , I guess my body did because my heart beat increased.
Oum was just smiling Sheepishly.
Saif grabbed oum's hand, caressing it.
Both I and her got surprised, but she enjoyed every moment or so I think.
"I have loved you, since the very first day I had laid my eyes on , the every day i met you ,
I lived every seconds of my life since that day for you.
Will you , live every day of your life with me" says saif looking deep into Oum's eyes.
I couldn't handle it , my feet where shaking , I started gritting my teeth.
My mum sat , amused.
I was confused, I was burning in rage, this is savagery, what is saif doing with oum, I felt like screaming but for some reason I tried to calm my self.
Oum kept flushing.
"Will you Mary me jawahir " said Saif turning to my direction.
"yes please , a million time I would " I stutter with tears rolling down my cheeks.
slipping the ring into my ring finger , saif pinched me.
"Ouch" I yelled.
"I knew you thought I was proposing to her, and you tired to hide your jealousy" .
"No , I didn't" I lied.
"Yes you did " echoed both Oum and mum
And every one chuckled.
"We are here says " Oum and every one got off the car,
I ran inside as fast as I could.
"Dad, dad " I yelled jumping into his embrace.
"Dad your little baby is all grown up" I muttered .
Dad, looked at me puzzling .
"He proposed"
"Am getting married" I yelled happily.
"Dad there he is" , I said pointing At saif whom just entered in.
Dad stood still ,
Even saif too.
They were all shock .
"What's wrong " I cut of the silent
"Did you know each other " I asked .
No one answered.
"Saif , come say Hy to my dad" I demanded .
Dad dragged me off him.
"You are not marrying him" said dad turning around.
Saif punched the wall, and all our attention turned to him.
"You are going to walk away, aren't you " said saif .
And i was confused by what he meant by that.

Jabir khulaid's p. O. V ;

When jawahir talked to me about her boyfriends grad , I was really glad to grace the event , but it was the same day with my son's and I could never forgive my self if I missed it.
So I decided to attend the grad ceremony of my son and the diner party of my to-be son-in law .
At the grad I saw my dear wife labiba, then did I realize saifullahi and jawahir's boyfriend are In the same collage,
So I lurked in the shadows like I have always did for 20years now.
I don't like keeping such a secret from my family but I do not have a choice, it's not just time I thought.

When jawahir told me she was getting married , I felt like the happiest father on earth, but my happiness got turn to regrets in a second when saif was introduced as my feature son-in law ,
I couldn't handle everything , so I decided to go from there .

When I heard saif I should run like I always do , so I decided it's time to face the tune.
Tears started rolling down jawahir cheeks as she asked saif why he said what he said.
"Jawahir you can't marry him" I said bluntly.
"Why , dad
Why , tell me" she raised her voice above mine, something she had never done before.
"Because his your brother , your half brother " I blurted out , lifting the heavy load I have lifted on my chest for quite a while.
"No, this can't be true " said jawahir in denial .
"Saif , don't listen to my father, he has lost it".
"Dad " says saif.
"You had betrayed the trust I had in you" muttered saif.
And I felt my heart strikes hard.
The children that hard once loved me and cheerish me are the ones against me today.
"I hate you , for doing this to me "cried jawahir in denial.
The kids that had looked At me with respect once , today looked at me with nothing less than disappointed.
"How can this be possible asked "jawahir .
"Am sorry " I muttered.
Both my children looked shattered and it's my fault the feeling breaks my heart.
We were all shocked to hear something fell down,
It was labiba.
She must have heard us.
Jawahir ran to her mum and I also followed,
"Go away from us,"
Move back yelled jawahir aggressively,
Oum I called out looking how disappointed she too looked.
But she also turned her back on me and winced towards jawahir.
The family I had worked hard to built got seperated today ...by me.
How on earth will I faced them .
I looked at my family once against both jawahir and saif in tears. My darling wife unconscious ...
And I am the course.

_______________________________

Will love to here from you ....👂.

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