So... I'm needing some major opinion here. Please, if you've got the time, answer some of the the questions below... Even if you can just answer one, that's AMAZING... please?!?
1. What is your overall impression/opinion of the book?
2. What major improvements do I need?
3. Is it too cheesy? What are some weak points?
4. Can you connect enough with the characters? Do you need more information on them?
5. I'm wanting to make the whole book longer... I'm planning on fleshing out the chapters a little. Will this help or hurt the flow of the book? Was it too boring in the first place?
6. Any other comments or questions you may have :)
THANKS A BAMILLION for reading, commenting, and answering these questions!!!!
And, naturally, I'll check out your stuff if you leave comments. I'm a naturally curious person :)