Time Tells • KNY (DISCONTINUE...

festivalgod द्वारा

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[𝘝𝘢𝘳𝘪𝘰𝘶𝘴!𝘒𝘕𝘠 𝘊𝘩𝘢𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘹 𝘍𝘦𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘦!𝘙𝘦𝘢𝘥𝘦𝘳] "𝐔𝐠𝐡, 𝐭𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐭𝐢... अधिक

•Prolouge•
•Chapter 1•
•Chapter 2•
•Chapter 3•
•Chapter 4•
•Chapter 5•
•Chapter 6•
•Chapter 7•
•Chapter 8•
•Chapter 9•
•Chapter 10•
•Chapter 11•
•Chapter 12•
•Chapter 13•
•Chapter 14•
•Chapter 15•
•Chapter 16•
•Chapter 17•
•Chapter 18•
•Chapter 19•
•Chapter 20•
•Chapter 21•
•Chapter 22•
•Chapter 23•
•Chapter 24•
-update!-

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festivalgod द्वारा


I regret to announce that this story will be discontinued.

—Why?
Answer(s) :
-I reread the story to recall where i left off, I realize that Y/N is Mary Sue.
-I'm not sure how to continue the story.
-The reader's character is very poorly written. Specifically her powers being badly portrayed (in my opinion) ^^
-I cringe at how rushed the characters relationship with Reader is.

—However!
I do consider rewriting this story, with a different plot and events, of course the time powers will remain.

BUT, Reader will be nerfed and everything else will change. I'm talking : Reader personality and background, relationships, events.

This decision would be made by all of you of course!
So please tell me what you all think.

—Should i rewrite this story?

—Comment here if yes.

—Comment here if no.

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