Married to Mr doctor husband

By pnhardilad

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the story is about two persons one is Dr ob-gynecologist and his name is dr Neil Khanna and other one is doin... More

Character Introduction
Preparation of meeting
Tied in a relationship
Family Lunch🥗🥪🍹
Buying Engagement Ring💍
Engagement Shopping 🥗🍦
AvNeil Engaged💍💍💐
Cake 🎂 Dinner 🍽️ kisses 💋
AvNeil's wedding Date 🗓️
Bombay ✈️ Dehradun
Temple🛕 waterfall ⛲
Surprise For Ladylove❤️
Avni is injured🤧💉🌡️
Avni is sick 🤢
Punishment and Iron shots 💉
Neil Surprise Avni At College
Avni's Graduation Ceremony 🎓
Introduction At Hospital 🏥
Cake Attack and exercise👟🏃‍♀️🏃
Avni's Cooking Classes 🥄☕
Avneil Haldi💛
Avneil wedding Invitation card💑💖
AvNeil's Wedding 💒❤️
Asking questions ⁉️
Avneil's Wedding Night👩‍❤️‍💋‍👨♥️
Avneil's House warming 🏘️🥛
Celebration Time 🎈🤧🎉
Avneil's Honeymoon 🤿🦢⛲
Avneil's bad Morning 🩸🤒💉
Back To Bombay🌉
Avni's check up🩺💉🩸🍹
question answer session ❓
Avni's Reports
Avni's iron shots💉💉💊
Girl's Period Problem 🩸
Rakshabandhan🔪🩸💉
Brother's Love🌹🌼❤️🎂
Muhdikhai🙈
Angry Abhi😡😾
Surgery Preparation👩‍👧
Surgery & tantrums💉💊🩺
secret Planning Plotting
Surprise for Mom Dad❤️🎉🍾
🎉Cheers 2K votes⭐
Romance 💏 & Punishment🙉
Guest and Punishment 🤰😁💊
Game🎸🎵🚗 And Flashback
Kia's mistake 💊💉
Harnika & Siyappa🌧️🏥
Tantrums & Good News ✍️💉🤰
Happy Khannaz 🥞
New Promo🔥
Check Up & Missing Avni💉🤰
Question Answer session
Enter into Watty awards 2023😇🤞
story cover picture request
Avni is back 🔙💐
Young Generation Mistakes🖼️📱
Avni's friends & Tantrums
Avni's Birthday Begins 🎂❤️👨‍❤️‍💋‍👨
Grand Surprise For Avni💍👯
Neil's Gift 🎁💉
Sick Kia
Pumpkins of Khadoos Doctor 👯
Clothes And Peacock 🦚
Punishment & Australia 🌏🇦🇺
Request 🙏
Drunk Girls And Romance 🔥🍸
Angry Boys🍵🩺
Game &Fun🪑📿
Sangeet Night 🌃
Australia Tour 🦘🥵🔥
Promotion
Angry Akshu
Hurt abhi
Abhira Baby Shower🤰🎂🎉
Little Fairy 👼
Angry Boys 😠💉🤱👼
ABHIRA Babygirl 👼❤️🤩🧿
Vaccine💉
Welcome Abhira🎁👶
Fairy's Tantrums 🥛🤱
Guilty Akshu 🩺🤱
karva chauth Vrat tantrums 💧
Abhira's birthday👶 🎈🎂
twins babies 👶👶
avneil's angels 😇

Shot🩹& killed Nikhil

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By pnhardilad

( viraj , abhimanyu take out delivery boy's mobile and they used Khanna's landline number for making his mobile busy )

Viraj: Neil ab nikhil sochega ki uske admi ka call busy aa Raha hai ab start hoga action drama(Neil now nikhil thought that his gang member mobile is busy continuously and now it will begin active drama)

Neil( nods ): yes boys

Nikhil( thinking): ye delivery boy abhi tak papers leke kyu nahi aaya? Lagta hai firse uski biwi ne call kar ke pareshan karna start kar diya hai ( why this delivery boy has not came with papers? I think so again his wife called him and bothered him)

Avni( thinking and crying silently): neilu ko pata chala honga na ki me kidnapped ho gayi ho kash Maine neilu ko sach bata diya hota pehle se hi ( Neil would be know about my kidnapping or not , i wish i should have told neilu to truth before)

( Soon Neil, viraj , abhimanyu get ready to go to avni's kidnapped place to bring her back as viraj already told his friend of police and he immediately come with his force now all are all set to begin)

Sweta( immediately goes to temple and come with a aarti plate and red thread which she has already put infront of Krishna bhagvan): Neil, abhi ,viraj ruko beta mujhe aarti karne do ( Neil, abhi , viraj my child wait i need to do your aarti)

Neil: mom we are getting late

Sweta( cup his face): 2 minutes Neil

Neil( afraid already and his heartbeat is increasing per second): hmm( yes)

( Sweta first apply  tikka on Neil's forehead and aarti of neil, after that she apply tikka on abhi's forehead and then do aarti after that she apply tikka on viraj's forehead and do his aarti)

( Sweta then tied red thread on neil, abhi and Viraj's wrist and then Neil touch Sweta's feets)

Sweta ( put her hands on his head): jeet ke aana, meri bacchi and tu dono, sahi salamat aa javo( come with vicktory and my daughter, you safely come back )

( Abhi viraj touch Sweta's feets and she give blessings to them)

( After that they touch prakash's feets and he give same blessings like sweta)

( Neil, abhimanyu and viraj sit into car and reached to kidnapped place)

(Viraj's friend is ips officer and his name is akshay)

Akshay: boys sab log har ek jagah pe tainat ho javo( Boys everyone stand on different places ok)

His police force( give him standing salute ) : ok sir

( Police force stand on different places into the godown outside and inside places with holding a gun in each hands)

Akshay: Neil , abhi , viraj tum teeno mere sath dhire dhire chalo ok avaz mat karna warna kidnapper alert ho jayega ( Neil, abhi ,viraj you three come with me and slowly slowly walk otherwise kidnapper will be alert)

(Trio nods)

( Avni is thinking about Neil)

Avni( see her watch and crying silently): neilu tum kaha ho aa javo mujhe dar lag Raha hai, tumne mujhse kaha tha na ki musibat ke samay bhi tum mujhe bacha loge neilu aa javo your vicktoria, avni baby , mrs Khanna khatre me hai neilu i miss you ( neilu where are you I am afraid, you told me to take care of in bad situations too neilu come back your vicktoria, avni baby, mrs Khanna is into danger neilu i miss you)

( Akshay, Neil, abhimanyu and viraj slowly slowly enter into the godown and hide somewhere so that nikhil can't see them)

Neil( see avni from his teary eyes,avni's hands and legs tied into big rope and put hankerchief into her mouth so she can't speak ): meri baby bhaiya ( my baby brother)

Abhimanyu ( put his hands on his shoulder): Neil calm down

( Akshay gesture their another police force to go and hide behind nikhil )

( Neil see only 4 gang members of boys walking continuously)

Akshay( one by one slowly put needle into each gang members's neck): done now we are safe

Akshay : Neil tu kidnapper ke pass ja me abhi viraj yahi se handle karte hai ok?( Neil you go to kidnapper me viraj abhi will be here)

( Guys Akshay, viraj abhi, Neil everyone has wear jacket so if they would get shot then nothing will happen to them)

Neil( slowly slowly goes infront of nikhil as nikhil is sitting on the big chair with holding gun in his hand and avni is sitting on the chair with tied rope ): college boy how r u?
Nikhil( angrily and immediately get up): ay doctor tu yaha pe kya kar raha hai? ( Doctor what are you doing here?)

Avni( she cannot speak as her mouth tied with hankerchief): ammmmm nnnnnneeeeee

Nikhil( goes and immediately slap avni tightly): chup ho ja warna ek aur lagvavunga ( silent otherwise I will slap you one more)

( Avni immediately start crying)

Neil( angrily):  teri himmat kaise huyi meri wife pe hath uthane ki aj tak maine meri wife ke samne unchi avaz me kabhi baat nahi ki,  ( how dare u to slap my wife,till now I have never speak this much loudly)

Nikhil( put his gun on avni's head): dekh hath upar kar warna Teri biwi ko me khatam kar dunga ( look straight your hands behind head otherwise I will kill your wife)

Neil( afraid  and immediately put his hands behind his head): meri wife ko chod de please ( leave my wife please)
( Nikhil laugh loudly and immediately put his hands on avni's shoulder)

Neil( angrily): meri biwi ko chune ki koshish mat karna warna tere hath kat dunga ( dare u to even touch my wife otherwise I will cut your hands)

Viraj( angrily): akshay kuch kar ( akshay do something)

( Akshay , abhimanyu viraj , and two more police officer immediately come infront of nikhil)

Nikhil( angrily and hold hun on avni's head): dekh e policewala chup chap wahi pe khada reh or ye gun niche rakh warna iske bheje me ye goli dal dunga ( look police silently stand there only otherwise I will shot her into her brain)

Akshay ( slowly put guns on the floor ): lo rakh di( see we put)

Nikhil( laughing and smirking): very good akkal to hai tujhme ( very good you are smart)

Nikhil( angrily): doctor sahab ye tumne aacha nahi Kiya police bulane ki kya zarurat thi ab dekh me kya karta hu Teri biwi ke sath( doctor sir u didn't do good to call police now see what I will do with your wife)

Neil( angrily): tere gande hatho se agar tumne meri biwi ko chuva na to yahi Zinda gad dunga ( if you even touch my wife with your dirty hands then i will buried you here)

Avni( teary eyes see Neil ): ammmm neelllllllll

Nikhil( immediately tore avni's offshoulder tshirt and laughing like mad): ha ha( yes yes)

( Police force immediately come and nikhil's gun fall on floor and they start to beating him)

Neil( come near avni and immediately remove hankerchief from her mouth and immediately kisses on her forehead ): shhhhhhj me aa gaya hu na kuch nahi hoga meri baby ko, ( shhhh i am back nothing will happen to my baby)

Avni( crying continuously and holding Neil's chest): neiluuuu Everyone saw me

Neil( holding her tightly): no meri avni to pure hai kuch nahi huva u r safe in my arms( no my avni is pure nothing happened u r safe in my arms)

Viraj( immediately remove his blazer and put on avni's body as her bra is visible): shhhhh kisine kuch nahi dekha meri behna ko shhhhh( shhhh no-one has see you to my sister)

( Viraj and Abhimanyu quickly open the rope)

Avni( crying immediately holding Neil's chest): neilu usne mujhe chune ki koshish ki ( neilu he trying to touch me)

Neil( sweetly and tightly hug her and make her listen his heartbeat): shhhh neilu usse nahi chodega meri baby ko gande hatho se touch Kiya shhhhh nahi rote Mera baccha bhukhar aa jayega shhhh( shhhh neilu won't leave him he trying to touch u with dirty hands shhhhh no don't cry my child u will get fever shhhhh)

( Neil, abhimanyu , viraj , akshay is ready to go outside )

( Police force continuously beat him like a mad , Nikhil become furious and try to reach near gun on the floor )

Nikhil( Angrily): doctor sahab tujhe to me nahi chodunga , tu Zinda yaha se nahi jayega (doctor  i won't leave you you won't go alive)

( Nikhil hold gun immediately shoot on Neil but avni push him and she got shot on her stomach and immediately fall on the floor)

( Neil fall hardly so he got injured on his forehead but he see avni with teary eyes and try to get up, viraj and Abhimanyu immediately come and try to hold Neil's hand and help him to stand)

(Neil, viraj , abhimanyu immediately goes near avni)

Avni( teary eyes and wince as got shot in her stomach): neilllllu

Neil( teary eyes): avniiii

( Avni immediately unconscious in Neil's arm and Neil becomes furious and immediately get up and slap Nikhil, meanwhile ambulance is already ready so viraj and Abhimanyu pick avni into bridal style and make her lie down on the stratcher)

Neil( angrily continuously slap nikhil): how dare u touch my wife, how dare u to shoot her? ,

Neil( angrily slapping): tere maa baap ne tujhe college me ye sab karne ke liye bheja tha? Aurton ki izzat karna nahi sikhaya tere maa baap ne? ( Your parents sent you for doing this things into college? Your parents didn't teach you how to give respect to women?)

Nikhil( angrily): maine Mera badla le liya Teri biwi ne mujhe pure college ke samne thappad mara tha na ( i took my revenge your wife slapped me infront of whole College)

Neil( angrily): i am proud of my wife to slap you as you already don't know how to give respect

Akshay( immediately call deputy commissioner and he told him to do his encounter immediately as he would be threat for every women and angrily): nikhil byye byyy u sadist person

( Akshay immediately shoot nikhil on his brain and he immediately killed)
Neil( handsake akshay): thank you officer

Akshay ( smiling): it's ok it's my duty and take care of your wife

Viraj: guys let's go

( Neil, abhimanyu and viraj immediately went to hospital)

Neil(teary eyes to see avni's face): mera baccha kitna hasta khelta rehta tha 2 din se avni ki hasi nahi suni maine , avni baby tumhe neilu ke pass wapas aana hai promise na? Neilu promise?( My baby was laughing, smiling i didn't heard her laughter from 2 days , avni baby you have to come back to your neilu promise? Neilu promise?)

( Neil kisses on her forehead and hold his fingers with her fingers)

FLASHBACK

( Guys it's scene before avni's kidnapped)

Neil( kisses on her forehead): dekho avni Girish gauri sab log yahi pe hai ok agar tumhe dar lagta hai to mujhe call kar dena ok( see avni Girish gauri everyone is here if you afraid then call me immediately)

Avni( show her small finger): ok neilu pinky promise

Neil( smiling and joint his small finger): pinky promise avni baby

Neil( again kisses on her forehead): take care ok

( Avni nods and Neil try to walking but afraid to leave her )

Neil( thinking): subah se bechani si feel ho rahi hai jaise kuch bura hone wala hai Krishna ji meri avni ki raksha karna ( from morning i am feeling something will bad happen krishna god protect my avni )

( Avni waves her hand and Neil see avni with weird feelings)

FLASHBACK ENDS

( Neil remember about their cute scene)

Abhimanyu: Neil avni ki surgery karni hai hume Jana hai ( Neil Avni's surgery is going to happen we have to go)

Neil( hug abhimanyu immediately): bhaiya meri avni ke bagair me nahi jee pavunga please save her( brother i can't leave without my avni please save her)

Abhimanyu: humari avni sahi salamat wapas aa jayegi I promise ( we will get our avni safely i promise)
( Neil immediately goes inside his cabin and sit on the sofa  and see avni's bride photo and put on  his heart and crying immediately)

Neil( crying continuously): avni my baby please come back i can't leave without u

Viraj ( come with a holding a first aid box and see neil  and goes near Neil and hug Neil immediately): shhhhh shant ho ja Neil dekh tujhe chot lagi hai na mujhe bandage karne Dena yaar( shhhhhhh calm down you injured your forehead let me do your bandage)

Neil( crying like baby holding viraj tightly): noooo mujhe kuch nahi karwana mujhe meri avni chahiye ( no i don't want to do anything, i want my avni)

Viraj( explaining him like baby): accha dekh agar avni ne dekhi Teri chot to wo pareshan ho jayegi na ? Usse kitna bura lagega ki uska neilu bilkul bhi dhyan nahi rakhta tu chahta hai ki usse bura Lage bolo?( Ok look if your avni see your injury then she will be upset right? She will feel bad that her neilu don't take care of himself u want that avni feel bad ? Tell me?)

Neil( teary eyes and see viraj ): no meri avni ko goli lagi hai wo bimar hai me usse or jyada stress nahi dena chahta ( no my avni got shot she is sick already, i don't want to give her more stress)

Viraj( cup his face): good boy abhi bandage kar deta hu( good boy i will do your bandage right now)

(Viraj take out anticeptic bottle and take little bit of anticeptic liquid into cotton and put it on his injured forehead )

( Neil didn't even feel pain as he is thinking about avni his baby)

Viraj( thinking and continuously wiping blood from cotton): krishna ji please meri behan avni ko humare pass wapas bhej do me Neil ki halat aise nahi dekh sakta( krishna god please return avni my sister to us i can't see Neil's bad condition)

( Viraj after wiping his injured forehead he applied cream and immediately apply bandage 🩹)

( Abhimanyu has already give iv to avni and put oxigen mask on her face)

( Abhimanyu is busy into do avni's surgery, he makes big portion on her stomach and with the help of surgical instruments he takes out bullet successfully and immediately stich her stomach and put bandage and taps it)

( Sweta prakash bebe reach immediately to hospital as viraj inform them that avni got shot into stomach)

( Sweta prakash goes into cabin and see Neil is continuously crying holding viraj)

Sweta ( teary eyes): mere Neil ko aise rote kabhi nahi dekha prakash ji ( i have never seen my Neil to crying like this prakash)

Prakash: our son needs you Sweta ji go

( Neil heard Sweta's voice and see her with teary eyes and put his head on Sweta's lap )

Neil( crying continuously and holding Sweta tightly): mom meri avni , usss bastard ne meri avni pe goli chalayi ( mom my avni that bastard shoot my avni)

(Tillu is Neil's Nick name Sweta and prakash sometimes call Neil by this name)

Sweta ( having tears): shhhhhhjh accha dekh mere samne dekh tillu tujhe pata hai na surgery ke baad patient ka kitna dhyan rakhna padta hai na? Agar tu aise hi rota rahega to bimar pad jayega fir meri bacchi avni ka dhyan tu kaise rakh payega? Shant ho ja tillu shhhhh mumma ka good boy hai na shant shant shant ( shhhhhhhhh look infront of me tillu u know na after surgery how much we have to take care of patients right? If you continuously crying like this then you will sick then how will u  take care of my daughter avni ? Calm down Tillu shhhh you are mom's good boy right? Calm down relax relax)

Neil( wipe his tears): mumma ap thik keh rahe ho agar me hi bimar ho gaya to meri baby ka dhyan me kaise rakh pavunga , no meri avni thik ho jayegi haina mumma ( mom you are saying right if i will be sick then how i will be taking care of my avni? No my avni will be alright right mom?)

Sweta ( wipe his tears with her hands): yes mera baccha ( yes my child)

( Viraj immediately get up and come with a holding a glass of water for Neil)

Viraj( give glass to sweta): Neil ko pani pila dijiye aunty ( make Neil drink water aunty)

Sweta ( smiling and put glass of water near his lips): tillu le thoda sa Pani pi le( tillu take drink little bit of water)

Neil( push glass): mom no jab Tak avni ko hosh nahi aa jata me nahi khana khavunga or nahi Pani pivunga( mom no when avni will not conscious till than i won't eat drink)

Prakash (goes near Neil): tillu thoda sa pi le papa ki baat bhi nahi manega?( Tillu drink little bit of water won't you agree your father?)

Neil( cutely pout): dadddd

Sweta ( immediately give glass to neil): you are not mumma's boy huhhhh😏

( Soon abhimanyu come)

Neil( immediately get up and see abhimanyu): bhaiya avni ko hosh aa gaya?( Brother did avni conscious?)

Abhimanyu ( put his hands on his shoulder): avni ke stomach se goli nikal di hai thode ghante me hosh aa jayega avni ko( i have removed bullet from her stomach she will get conscious into few hours )

( Everyone is getting  peace after hearing news)

Neil( having tears and hug immediately abhi): thank you bhaiya ( brother)

Abhimanyu ( pat his back and wipe his tears): tu ja Ghar pe thoda fresh ho ja( you go home and freshnp)

Neil: no i won't go anywhere
( Everyone knows Neil is too stubborn)

( Suddenly akshu come and running with a kairav )

Abhimanyu ( see akshu running): akshu what the hell

Akshara( sit on the sofa as her heartbeat is too fast): abhiiii

( Abhi immediately sit beside akshu and put her head into his chest and make her listen his heartbeat and Viraj immediately get up and come with a holding a glass of water for akshu and now akshu is normal)

Abhimanyu ( take glass from viraj's hand and immediately put near her lips): akshu agar tum bhul gayi ho to me tumhe yaad dila du ki tum pregnant ho agar dubara Maine tumhe aise dodte huye aate dekha na to I will punish you ( akshu if you forget them i will remind you that you are pregnant and if I will again show you like running then i will punish you)

Viraj: kairav tum akshu ko yaha kyu lekar aaye ? ( Kairav why you brought akshu here?)

Akshara: bhaiya mujhe avni se milna hai abhi ke abhi ( brother i want to meet avni right now)

Sweta( come near akshu): akshu avni ko abhi rest ki zarurat hai tum kal aa jana ok tum Ghar javo ( akshu avni needs rest you come tomorrow ok ? You go home?)

Viraj: kairav tum akshu ko medicine khila rahe ho na?( Kairav r u making her eat medicine?)

Kairav: it's too difficult dude but I am making her eat don't worry

Akshara: abhi mujhe ghar Anna hai?( Abhi I want to come home)

Abhimanyu ( caressing her hair): akshu kal aa jana aj rat ke liye kairav bhaiya ke sath chali javo ok( akshu u come tomorrow today night u go with kairav brother ok

Akshara ( sad pout): ok abhi

( Abhi kisses on akshu's forehead and kisses on her tummy)

( Akshu and kairav went)

Scene ends

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