BALVEER RETURNS FANFIC

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Balveer Returns ?
VIVI MEETS DEBU
THE SECRER HELPER
FREIND OR FOE ?
Debs Past Revealed
THE UNKNOWN HELPER
DEBU - VIVAN REUNITES
ARRIVAL OF RANI PARI
RANI PARI IN DANGER
Shivputra vs jwala
THE LAST WAR OF JWALA
DHOKHA YA SAJIS : (MULTIUPDATE )
ALL HEROES IN LIFE STAKE (MULTIUPDATE )
P.S
CHARACTER/PLACE SKETCH
THE TATWA YANTRA ...
COMEBACK OF BALVEER
DEBU AND GANG AT BHARAT NAGAR
ENTRY OF TANYA .
THE RAKSHAK NIYUKTI
THE BONDING STARTS ( SHIVANYA )
DEBU GONE MISSING
THE WRONG DECISION
PROBLEMS STARTS
REVEALING SECRETS AND THE ATTACK ON FAIRY REALM
THE BETRAYAL OR MISBELIEF ?
THE UNBELIEVABLE LOSS
THE LEGACY TO BE MADE ........
THE MEETUP - IS THIS THE TRUTH ?
DARKNESS RISES
WRITERS TALK
Dharti par khatra
AWAKENING OF SHAURYA
SAVIOURS IN ACTION
STAGING - THE FINAL BATTLE
NAYA ARAMBH - BVR SEASON 3
RESTORING ORDER FROM CHAOS
THE NEW BEGINNING
AUTHOR'S NOTE :
BALVEER SEASON 3

NOT APART YET CANT BE TOGETHER

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RECAP : ANANYA INJURED , VIVAN ENTRERS CHIKITSA KAKSH .

AB AAGE :

ANANYA : VIVAN ? KYA HUA ? AAYE PAR MILEBINA JA RAHE HO ?

VIVAN : WOH KUCH NAHI DIDI ( WIPING HIS TEARS ) BAS AAPKO DISTURB NAHI KARNA TAH SO.

DEBU : ( TEASING ) BOLO NAHI SUNO 😆 VIVAN TUH ASHI KO LEKAR TENSED HAI I KNOW BUT HAM USKA SOLUTION NIKAL LENGE . IN FACT MAIN ABHI JA RAHA HU.

ANANYA : HA VIVAN AUR MAIN BHI JA RAHI SATH .

DEBU : NAHI TUM NAHI. TUM ARAM KARO .AUR VIVAN TUM SHIV KO BULAO IS RAY KA KUCH KARNA PADEGA .

ANANYA :OH HELLO ( POINTS A FINGER )

DEV : HELLO (TURNS THE POINTING TO HANDSHAKE ) .

ANANYA :MAIN CHAL RAHI THATS FINAL AUR AB TUMNE KUCH BOLA NA MAIN TUMSE BAT NAHI KARUNGI.

DEBU : OK BUT PROMISE KARO KI WAHA KI KOI BHI BAT PAR TUM DRAMAQUEEN NAHI BANOGI.

ANANYA :PROMISE.

DEBU: OK SO LETS GO.

ANANYA AND DEBU GOES TO SHOURYA . B.P WAS THERE ALREADY WITH OTHER FAIRIES.

SHOURYA : AAO BALVEER , ANANYA KAISE HO ?

ANANYA : MAIN THIK HU . SHOURYA HAME AAPSE KUCH JRURI BAT KARNI THI.

SHOURYA : HA KYU NAHI BOLO .

DEBU : SHOURYA WOH...

B.P : KYA BALVEER BATAIYE .

DEBU : WOH MAIN ANANYA SE PYAR KARTA HU AUR ASHI SE SHADI NAHI KAR SAKTA .

JAWS OF ALL FAIRIES DROPPED .
AND SHOURYA AND B.P WERE IN SHOCK.

B.P : BAALVEER ( IN LOUD VOICE ) AAP YEH KYA BOL RAHE HAI ?

DEBU : MA MAIN WAHI BOL RAHA HU JO SACH HAI. ( EYES DOWN )

SHOURYA : YEH NAMUMKIN HAI . AUR AB BAS IS BARE MEIN KOI BAT NAHI.

ANANYA : ( ALMOST CRYING ) KYU... SHOURYA ... AISI NAIMSAFI KYU ?

SHOURYA :KARAN JANNA HAI APALOGO KO ? AGAR BATA DIYA TIH AAP KHUD YEH KHYAL BHUL JAENGE .

DEBU : AISA KYA KARAN HAI SHOURYA ?

B.P : YAHI KI BALVEER

FLASHBACK :

SHOURYA : MAYARAJ AAPNE VEERLOK KI ITNI SAHAYTA KI HAI AAPKE LIYE HAM KUCH AKR SAKE TOH KRIPYA BATAYE .

M.R : SHOURYA AAPSE EK WINTI HAI .

SHOURYA : KAISI WINTI MAYARAJ ?

M.R : SHOURYA MAIN CHAHTA HU KI MERI BETI KI SHADI KE LIYE AAP WAR CHUNE .

SHOURYA : ITNI SI BAT ? HAMARA BALVEER AAPKI BETI SE SHADI KAREGA . AUR YEH MERA AKHAND VACHAN HAI.

M.R : PAR VACHAN BALVEER KO LENA HAI NA ?

SHOURYA : HA PAR MAIN USKI TARAF SE WACHAN LETA HU.

M.R : DHANYAWAD SHOURYA .

FLASHBACK ENDS.

SHOURYA : TOH YEH KARAN HAI 😤.

DEBU : PAR SHOURYA M.R KE KATHAN KE ANUSAR AAP KISI AUR ANUKUL VYAKTI SE SHADI KARWA SAKTE HAI ASHI KI.

SHOURYA : HA PAR USKE LIYE TUMPAR SE AKHAND WACHAN HATANA HOGA . JISKE LIYE PRAN AHUTI CHAHIYE HOGI.

ANANYA : MUJHE MANJUR HAI.

EVERYONE GETS SHOCKED .

DEBU : KYA ? PAGAL HOGAYI HO TUM ? AISA KUCH NAHI KAROGI TUM .

ANANYA : SHOURYA AAP MUJHE BATAIYE KYA KARNA HOGA ?

SHOURYA : PRAN AHUTI DEKAR PARI TARA KO JAGANA HOGA . AUR UNKE ASHIRWAD SE HI YEH WACHAN TUTEGA .

ANANYA : MUJHE MANJUR HAI .

DEBU : MUJHE MANJUR NAHI HAI AUR AGAR HAI BHI TOH MERA WACHAN MAIN AHUTI DUNGA.

ANANYA : TUM BALVEER HO TUMHARI JRURT HAI DUNIYA KO MERI NAHI .

DEBU : ANU WAIT........

BEFORE DEBU COULD COMPLETE HIS WORDS ANANYA RUNS AWAY AND STARTS CHANTING THE MANTRA FOR REVIVING PARI TARA .
DEBU WAS UNABLE TO STOP HER. SUDDENLY SHE STARTED FEELING DIZZY WHICH WAS EASILY NOTICEABLE WHILE PARI TARA STARTED TO GLOW.

DEBU : ( IN ANGER ) AISA KYU KIYA AAPNE SHOURYA ? KYU ?

SHOURYA : BALVEER MAINE WAHI KIYA JO MUJHE SAHI LAGA.

DEBU : AAPKO JO SAHI LAGE HARWAQT WOH SAHI NAHI HOTA HAI SHOURYA . ( HE PUNCHES THE GROUND BREAKING IT )

SHOURYA : JYADA JAJBATI MAT HO BALVEER .

DEBU : JAJBATI ? ( SMILES SARCASTICALLY WHILE SHEDDING TEARS ) JAJBATI AUR MAIN ? SACH MEIN SHOURYA ? ABHI TAK AAP KI BATO KO MANNE WALA JAJBATI KAISE JO SKATA HAI ?

SHOURYA : KEHNA KYA CHAHTE HO BALVEER ? ( IN CONFUSED TONE )

BALVEER : YAHI KI SHOURYA AAPNE HAMESA MERE APNO KO MUJHSE DUR KIYA HAI MERE MAA PAPA BHAI AUR AAJ ANANYA KO BHI 😡.

B.P : BALVEER ( COMES AHEAD AND SLAPS HIM )  HIMMAT KAISE HUI APAKI SHOURYA SE IS TARAH BAT KARNE KI .

BALVEER : MA AAP BHI ( SARCASTIC SMILE )

BEFORE  ANYONE COULD SAY ANYTHING ELSE SUDDENLY ANANYA FALLS . EVERYONE RUSHES THERE . DEBU PUTS HER HEAD ON HIS LAP . AND STARTS CONSOLING HER .

DEBU : ANU TUMHE KUCH NAHI HOGA TUM THIK HO JAOGI. ( CRYING ) KOI KUCH KARO NA .

ANANYA : ( PEACEFULL SMILE ) DABBU AB TUM AJAD HO . ( MUMBLING )

DEBU: HA AUR AB HAM DONO SATH RAHENGE. TUM ....TUM BILKUL THIL HOJAOGI.

ANANYA : HA HAM SATH RAHENGE PAR MAN MEIN SHAREER NAHI .
( SAYING THIS ANANYA DIES )

DEBU : ( SCREAMING )  ANANYAAAAAA.

DEBU WAS CRYING WITHOUT STOPPING . HE WAS SO SAD THAT HE CANT EVEN AFFORD TO QUARREL SHOURYA

DEBU : KYU KIYA TUMNE AISA 😖.

VIVAN REACHES THERE WITH OTHERS . EVERYONE'S EYES GETS FILLED WITH TEARS. EVERYONE RUNS TO DEBANYA .

VIVAN : BHAIYA DIDI KO KYA HUA ? YEH UTH KYU NAHI RAHI . UTHIYE NA DIDI.

DEBU : AB YEH NAHI UTHEGI VIVAN .

SHIV : BHAIYA PAR HUA KYA ? AISA KIYA KISNE ?

DEBU : (STARES TO SHOURYA ) ISNE KHUD HI AISA KIYA 😖.

VIVAN : KUCH TOH KIYA JA SAKTA HAI NA KUCH BHI MAIN HARCHEEJ KARUNGA KUCH TOH BATAIYE SHOURYA.

SHOURYA  :JEEVAN AUR MRITYU KE SI CHAKRA MEIN SHTISHTI KE MAHASHAKTISHALI BHI KUCH NAHI KAR SAKTE VIVAN .

DEBU : PAR BAKI PARIYON KI TARAH ANANYA KI BHI TOH URJA HOGI ?

SHOURYA : NAHI KYUNKI ISNE PRAN AHUTI DI HAI . TOH AB ISKI URJA IS SHRISTI MEIN NAHI HAI .

DEBU : ANANYA UTHO NA ( CRYING HIS EYES BECOMES RED ) UTHO NA MISS PUNE REJECT PLEASE .

VIVAN : BHAIYA SAMBHALIYE APNE AAP KO .

BGM:


SHOURYA : BALVEER AB KARIGAR PARI KO VIDAI DO . BINA ROYE. UNKI IS KURBANI KO HAM YAD RAKHENGE.

SHOURYA  BLASTS A RAIN OF FLOWERS . WHILE OTHERS SEND SEVERAL COLOUR RAYS TO THE STARS . AND ANANYA'S BODY WAS BEING CARRIED BY A CRYING DEBU FOR PUTTING IN GRAVE . SUDDENLY  SHIV HOLDS DEBS HAND AND STOPS HIM FROM PUTTING ANANYA IN GRAVE . EVERYONE GETS SHOCKED.

SHIV : BHAIYA RUKIYE.

DEBU : SHIV YAHA TUMHARI SHAKTIYA KISI KAM KI NAHI HAI.

SHIV : MERI NAHI PAR PITAJI KI HAI . ( SAYING THIS HE FLIES ) .

DEBU :  KASH AISA HO . ( DEB SAYS CRYING HE WAS STILL HOLDING ANANYA NEAR HIS CHEST )

SHOURYA (LOW VOICE ) : SHIVPUTRA SHRISHTI KE NIYAM KO TODKAR AAP BHUT BADI GALTI KARENGE .

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HEYO SO EVERYONE HOWS TODAYS CHAPPY. HOPE YOU GUYS ARE LIKING THE NEW TWIST . BTW ASHI IS NOT HIGHLIGHTED  IN THIS SCENE CAZ SHE IS NEW IN VEERLOK  AND SHE IS NOT REALTED TO ANANYA.

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