Revealing Glances: Unsettling...

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[Ongoing] A collection of unsettling or unusual short stories. Some have monsters, some have humor, some draw... Mai multe

Foreword
Heroes Suck
Behind the Scenes: Heroes Suck
Bootleg Meg
I Killed Time to Survive
Behind the Scenes: I Killed Time to Survive
Would You Rather
Behind the Scenes: Would You Rather
Friends Until the Break of Dawn
Behind the Scenes: Friends Until the Break of Dawn
Body, Abducted
Behind the Scenes: Body, Abducted
Remember
Behind the Scenes: Remember
Deserve
Behind the Scenes: Deserve
Incomprehensibility
Behind the Scenes: Incomprehensibility
The Basket Stripper
Behind the Scenes: The Basket Stripper
Preposterous Prank Gone Perilous
Behind the Scenes: Preposterous Prank Gone Perilous
Elevator Monster
Behind the Scenes: Elevator Monster
Tradition
Behind the Scenes: Tradition
Codes
Behind the Scenes: Codes
Move On
Behind the Scenes: Move On
Assumptions
Behind the Scenes: Assumptions
Blindsided
Behind the Scenes: Blindsided

Behind the Scenes: Bootleg Meg

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This story's idea was actually based on a real bootleg VHS tape of The Hunchback of Notre Dame that we saw as children. Just like in the story, someone had filmed it in a theatre, the sound was slightly off, and we could see sporadic silhouettes across the bottom. And just like in the story, right after Quasimodo's dramatic "sanctuary" bit, the movie zoomed out, leaving a tiny screen in the center of our TV.

Unlike my story, though, whoever was operating the camera realized their mistake and zoomed in right away. It may seem like a forgettable error, but as children, those few seconds transported us to that movie theater.

I generally veer towards writing stories with dialogue, dilemmas, or plots that are too complex for my own good, but when this memory popped into my head, I thought I'd try my hand at pure horror. It was a fun exercise to come up with my own creepy creature, and although Bootleg Meg didn't break any molds, a few of my beta readers did find her description revolting, so I think she did her job. I also had fun sketching her out (see related image).

If you've read the story, let me know what you think. I'm always open to feedback, suggestions, and critique!

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