Rewrite the Stars (Completed)

By priyapariyaar

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One of the hardest decision in life is to choose between love and family.... N Shiva has to make that decisi... More

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prologue
mission joote - churao/bachao!
jeet gaya hum!!!!!
shadi ki baat
planing
rumours
new feelings
ride
mission vicky!!!!
plan successful or flop??
care in the first step in love
tujhe kabse meri chinta hone lagi??
checking chemistry
fever!!!
dream !!
ignore
anniversary
celebration
closer
shiva with other girl
realising my feeling
shiva ko bachana
kya chal raha hai??
what am i feeling??
its 'IT' what i m thinking??
is it love???
Am I in LOVE????
yes i m in love
confession
ShiVi ❤
godhbharai
truth or dare
shadi ki baat
pandya parivaar ki bahu??
raavi outbrust
saathi rey thoda thehar ja
humari adhuri kahani
tujhe kitna chaahein lage hum
REWRITE THE STARS
pehle pyaar ka pehla gham
duniya yeh jeeti gayi, dil har gaya
ranjha
Dev-raavi ki shadi ho gayi 🥺😭
sara jag chad ke bas tenu hi hai chuneya
shadi nahi karna
iktara
epilogue
new story

who will win??

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Raavi pov....

Bhootnath n I were continuously staring each other....

Joote toh ajj ladki wale hi le jayenge!! 😏

Krish - raavi!!!!!! (Excitingly shouting) ... Idar aa toh!!

I went towards them....

Raavi- kya huwa???

Krish - Tu joota churane ka plan drop karde kyunki paise toh jeetne wali nahi hai !!! (Laughing)

Raavi- aa bachu asi baat!!!!! Abb tu dekh joote bhi le jaungi aur paise bhi!!! (In a challenging voice)

Shiva- itne udd maat nahi toh gir jayega!!!

Raavi - meri girne ki chinta tu maat kar ..... Tu bass joote par nazar rakh... Warna nazar hati dur ghatna  ghati !!!! (Smirking)

Pandit ji - dulhan ko bulaye!!!!

Pandit ji was calling the dulhan and therefore I left my conversation n went to take anita di

Krish - yeh raavi toh bohot determine hai joote churane ke liye!!! Ache se Nazar rakhna.....

Dev- waise kaha chupaya hai!!!!

Shiva n krish smirk!!!

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Raavi- anita di!!!! Pandit ji bula rahe hai!!! (Excitingly shouting)

As I enter her room..... I saw her standing.... She was looking so beautiful in her bridal lehenga ....

Raavi- hay nazar na lag jaye !!!! (Smiling)

Anita di blushes!!!

Raavi- di bohot sundar dikh rahi ho....
Ajj toh hardik jiju ke hosh udane ka irada hai kya??? (Teasing)

Anita - tu bhi na..... (Blushing)

Raavi- chalo chalo, Pandit ji dulhan ko bula rahe hai!!!! (Teasing)

Then I took Anita di with me.....

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We reach the mandap..... All were looking adorably at Anita di.... While masi maa n masa paa had teary eyes.... N hardik jiju had a very big smile....

Then Anita sit down beside hardik jiju....... Then the Pandit ji chanted the mantra......

I have to steal the shoes...... Mein ladke walo ko jeetne nahi de sakhti... 🙄

I look around n saw sai n krish were talking....

Plan is working........ Good going sai!!!😁

Then I saw around to see anokhi n dev were also talking.....

Chalo anokhi bhi lag gayi...... Cho raavi abb teri baari hai!!!! 😁

I look around n saw that shiva was busy talking with some guest....

Chalo raavi tu bhi start karle.... 😅

Then I wake towards Shiva....

Raavi- hello!!!!

Shiva and that boy turn to me..

Raavi- if u dont mind kya mein Shiva ko thodi der ke liye le jao!!! (Smiling)

That boy smile n nodded..... He left

Shiva gave me an irritated smile..

Shiva - kya hai Tujhe ??(irritated)

Raavi- tujhe kuch dikhana hai... (Smiling)

Then I hold his hand n drag him....

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I took him to his favourite place..... The food counter .

I know Shiva is a food lover .... Usse bass uska favourite mittai khilao n sach pata lagao!!!

Shiva look at me Irritatingly...

Shiva- yaha kyu layi hai!!! (Annoyed)

Raavi- food counter mein kyu aate hai (frown) ... Of course khaana khane ke liye right!!!! (Smiling)

Before Shiva could reply I put a ladoo in his mouth!!!

He was shocked....... Then he could at me angrily!!!!

Right now he is looking very funny!!! 🤣🤣

I started laughing because I couldn't control my laugher..... He is looking really really funny!!!!!

Shiva angrily glare at me n start chewing the ladoo .... After chewing the ladoo I gave him water n he drank it...

Shiva - yeh kya tha??? (Angrily)

Raavi- kya tha matlab obviously tujhe ladoo khila rahi hoon !!! (Laughing)

Shiva put a ladoo in my mouth while I was laughing...... I angrily glare at him....

He was laughing like an idiot....

Shiva - tujhe kya laga... (Laugh) tu mujhe mittai khilakar... (Laugh) joote ka pata legi (laugh) budu samajh kar rakha hai kya (laugh) Shiva !!! Shiva naam hai mera.... Itni jaldi bewakoof nahi bana payegi!!!! (Laughing)

I was angrily looking at him and chewing the ladoo

Shiva - waise tu bohot sundar dikh rahi hai.... Ek photo toh banta hai (laughing)

Nahi!!!!!!! 😬😬

He took out his phone n click my photo.... It was so quick that I didn't realised it....

He then run away...

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The ceremony was still going on.... I need to focus on my sister's wedding too.... I texted sai...

Kuch pata chala?? 🤨

I was getting restless....


Ha!!!!! Joote tere room ke Cupboard mein chupaya hai!!!!

Sai message shock me .....

What mere room ke Cupboard mein!!! 😳😳

I was very shock ......

Mujhe 440 volt ka current lag gaya hai.... Koyi ambulance ko call karo!!!! 🤯🤯

I was too shock to even reply

Kya huwa??

I collect my strength n texted her

Tujhe krish ne bataya???

Nahi meine krish aur Shiva ko baat karte huwe dekha tha.....!!!

Woh toh tujhe bewakoof bane ke liye bhi bol sakte hai na!!!

Nahi raavi jab woh baat kar rehe the mein unn dono par nazar rak rahi thi..... I m sure they won't know that I was peeping their conversation!!!!

Thik hai toh mein jakar dekhti hoon!!!!

Mansi maa was angrily glaring at me.... N so I silent my phone...

Abb kaise bhi karke room mein jaana hoga..... Shadi katam hone ke pehle toh  masi maa jaane nahi ja sakti😒..... Bt its k Shiva ya phir dev aur krish bhi nahi ja sakte, dhara di jaane hi nahi degi!!!! 😏

I was atleast relief that neither could I leave nor them...

I look at shiva n krish...... Shiva was giving me an irritated wala look while krish was smirking!!!!!

For the last time I touch my phone ..... N then masi maa look at me again.... N so I kept my phone on my purse....

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

That chipkali was  angrily glaring at us!!!!

Krish - raavi ko kabhi pata nahi chalega ki joote kaha chupaya hai!!! (Smirking)

Shiva - obviously idea mera tha !! (Proudly)

Krish - tune thik bol tha.... Raavi joote kahi bhi dhundegi par apne room mein kabhi nahi ..... Smart hai tu!!! (Smiling)

Shiva - pata hai (proudly).... Waise uske room mein joote rakhna ek alag hi task tha.... Yeh mami bar bar us kamre par aa ja rahi thi!!! (Angrily glaring at mami)

Krish - par tune manage kiya na....... Acha hi huwa tune mama ke samne meri chot ka bahana kiya.... Aur mama bichare humein dawai lagane ke liye raavi ke room mein bhej diya!!! (Laughing)

Everyone glare at us.... This krish was laughing out loud....

Krish put his head down n all concentrated on the marriage.... While chipkali was suspiciously glaring us...

Shiva - marwayega kya!!! (Irritated)

Krish - sorry woh excitement mein kuch zyada hi jor ne hass diya!!!

Dev- agar tum dono ase hi baat karte rahe toh bhabhi maaregi!! (Whispering)

Dev is right..... Already bhabhi had look at us 2 time .....  We can't let her look at us for the third time!!!

Shiva pov end

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Raavi pov....

Finally the wedding was over..... Anita was looking so beautiful putting sindoor a mangalsutra..... Masi maa n masa paa were very emotional.... While I was very happy that finally my sister will get all her happiness....

Shadi kitni special hoti hai na!!!!

Jab meine shadi ke saare rasam dekhe I feel an unknown feeling passing  through my heart.....

Kaise shadi pyaar ko ek pachan de deti hai... How marriage is so important in ones life.... Pyaar bohot special feeling hai aur jab pyaar shadi ke rishte mein badal jaati hai woh pyaar perfect ho jata hai!!!!!

All were smiling at the newly wed couple !!!

Pandit ji - baro ke ashirwaad lijiye!!

Then anita di n hardik bhai started taking the blessing

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I hug anita di as she came to me!!!

Raavi- I m so happy.... Finally apki khush mil gayi!!! (Smiling)

Anita di blushes...

Raavi- hardik jiju meri behan ka ache se kayal rakhna!!!

Hardik - ji sali sahiba !!!! (Smiling)

Suman - abb shadi ho gayi hai.... Toh kuch photo bhi kiche!!! (Smiling)

All nodded!!!!

Then we click some family photos n all...

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While I was busy clicking photos with my friends n family... I saw Shiva and krish going towards my room ....

Anokhi, sai n I smirk at each other n follow them...

Raavi- masi maw hum abhi aate hai... Tab thak app enjoy karo!!!

I didn't wait for masi reply n run....

Raavi pov end

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Shiva pov

As we reach her room.... We were shock the door was lock...

Krish - abb yeh kisne kiya!!! (Frown)

Then I hear some clapping sounds!!!

I hope mein jo soch raha hoon woh sach na ho!!! 🤞

I turn to see n then all my hope broke....

I saw chipkali with her chipkali friends...

Raavi- waise tera idea bohot acha tha.... Joote mere room mein chupane ka!!! (Laughing)

Krish n I look at each other shockingly.....

Raavi- par kya hai na jab baat karte hai tab ek nazar ghuma ke dekhna parta hai ki koyi sun toh nahi lega!!! (Smirking)

Her chipkali friends started laughing...

Sai- thank u krish.... Tumne baari help Ki hai meri !!!

Toh yeh sab is krish ki wajah se hai!!! 😠

I angrily glare at krish.... He gasped n run...

Sai- yeh toh daar gaya!!!! (Laughing)

Anokhi- hum ja kar dekhte hai!!! (Laughing)

Then they too run.....

Raavi- Shiva agar tu smart hai na toh phir mein smartest  hoon!!! (Smirking) ... Tujhe kya laga ki mujhe kuch pata nahi chalega.... Stupid samajh kar rakha hai kya???

Shiva - stupid samajhne ki toh baat hi nahi hai .... Tu stupid hai (sarcastically)

That chipkali angrily glared at me..

Raavi- ha ha... Isliye toh pata laga teh hi sai ko message karke door locked kiya hai!! (Irritated)

Flashback (raavi pov)

For th last time I touch my phone n text sai

Sai mera room locked kar dena..... Aur key Mujhe de dena!!!

N then I put the phone on my purse

Flashback end

Raavi- abb toh maza aayega jab mein bet jeet kar paise le jaungi aur tab tera  chehra..... I mean hara (lost) huwa chehra dekhne mein kitna maza aayega!!! (Smirking)

Bohot udd rahi hai na???? 😠

I hold her hand n then turn her around n pinned her to the wall.... We were standing very closed.... She gasped...

Shiva - zyada udd maat warna girne mein der nahi lagegi!!! ( angrily) ...... Aur ha bet bhi mein hi jeet kar dikhao ga !!!!! Harne wali toh tu hai (smirking)

Raavi- kya galat femi pal kar rakhi hai... Jeet ne wali toh mein hoon (smirking)

Shiva - let's see who will win??

Raavi- ya dekhte hai who will win??

Shiva pov end

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