The Blacksmith's Daughter

Note for readers

Firstly and foremost, THANK YOU ALL!!
Every read, vote and comment makes me burst with joy. The other day I showed a friend this books stats, and they were higher than I remember! Every day I get more comments votes and reads, and it truly makes my heart swell.
But, to be honest, I've been trying for about a month to create the next chapter, but I've been struggling. I know exactly what I want to happen, but putting it to words is proving difficult, plus I feel slightly restrained by the quality of my previous chapters... So I have decided, and started, to edit the previous chapters. Nothing to big, just more details, personality and change a couple of conversations to be a bit more realistic.
I hope this doesn't upset any of you, but I keep feeling as if something is off when I realised I've shoved so much in so few pages.

Hopefully you'll like it better (oh gawd, I'm so nervous)