hello there !!
this is my first published story, and i am kind of nervous to publish this but like a friend of mine said "gotta start some where".
this particular story is special to me because it is based off a story i wrote when i was nine. i'd like to think i was a good writer even at nine years old. but when i found this story, it was hard to follow and confusing. i had around five different families each characters having similar names, it was easy to get all the characters mixed up.
now rewriting/restructuring the story, i think that little nine year old me would be proud of the character development/plot changes i have made.
i hope you enjoy and i am always looking for any constructive criticism you can give !!
thank you <3
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Reid in the Rubble
General FictionReid has always lived in a broken world but when he finds out the huge secret his cold hearted father, the Emperor, has been hiding from the provinces, it's up to Reid to gather all his courage in hopes to unite entire civilizations for the survival...
