Okay everyone. This is my first time writing a real story. I would love any feedback, good or bad, so have at it. I am a total potterhead so I have been imagining this story for awhile. Hope its not too terrible.
I have created some of my own characters, but the concept of Harry Potter, and the characters of the books are all property of J.K. Rowling.
As I said, i would love any feedback. Please vote and comment so i know if I should continue.
Elena Patricia Phoenix Tabitha Merlin was not your average girl, nor was she an average witch. She possessed unusual powers, which were practically unheard of in the wizarding world. She was exposed to her telekinetic powers when she was four, the day that her parents were assassinated by order of He who must not be named. Her powers increased as she got older, shaping her to be perhaps one of the most powerful witches of all time. She had always attempted to keep the full extent of her powers secret. Most of the wizarding world was aware of her story and how she escaped her intended fate on the day of her parents death. The wizarding world echoed with the tale of the girl who evaded Voldemort's wrath by retreating into an impenetrable shield; but very few were aware of her ability to manipulate and move objects, even fewer knew of her healing abilities.
After her parents' untimely death, she was sent to live with her parents' best friends Elodora and Bartimaus Mooney, and they have loved her as their own and shielded her from the prying eyes of curious witches and wizards. Bartimaus worked for the ministry in the department of International Magical Cooperation, and has made to live in a different country every few years; working as an ambassador for the ministry of Britain. Elena has enjoyed moving with her adopted family, meeting new friends and learning about new countries, but was haunted by a constant loneliness, She was understandable guarded; she could not let herself become overly attached to the people she meets, because it would make it all the more painful when she would have to leave. She kept most people she met at arms length to protect herself, from the hurt of losing friends but also from those who would want to exploit her powers.
Seeing her suffering, Elodora and Bartimaus decided to send Elena Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizadry, under the care of her godfather, the headmaster Albus Dumbledore. The prospect of Hogwarts was exciting to Elena, especially because under the protection and guidance of Dumbledore she could use her special magic without fear. He could help her learn to control her immense power and learn the extent of her abilities. But most of all Elena was overjoyed at the prospect of remaining at the same school for the next four years. She would be able to make friends, and maybe let down her barriers and let them see her true self.
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Elena Merlin - A Harry Potter FanficFanfiction
Elena Patricia Phoenix Tabitha Merlin was not your average girl, nor was she an average witch. She possessed unusual powers, which were practically unheard of in the wizarding world. She was exposed to her telekinetic powers when she was four, the d...