Naruto-Revised

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A/n (author's note)
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'Thinking'
'Flashback'
Demon or other speaking
*Timeskip*
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"Mommy, mommy, mommy look I made three clones this time" came the cheers of a little girl. "Oh I'm so proud of you sweetie" came the happy cries of one Kushina Uzumaki, otherwise known as the fourth Hokage's loving wife. "Well done sweetheart, I knew you could do it" came the praise of one Minato Namikaze, otherwise known as the Fourth Hokage.

"Daddy" the little girl cried before running into her father's arms. "Welcome home honey" Kushina said walking over and giving her husband a kiss on the cheek. "Ewww that's gross mommy" the little girl whined causing the loving couple to laugh. "Hey where's our son" Minato asked looking at his wife.

"He's—hey mom, dad look up here" came the voice of a young boy. The two parents lifted their heads only to see their son standing on the side of a tree. "Oh will you look at that Minato-Kun our babies are growing up" Kushina cried tears forming in her eyes, but refusing to fall. "Yes they are honey, yes they are" Minato said bringing his wife into a one armed hug. The two watched on as their babies began to chase one after one another, bringing a smile to their parent's faces.

These two children were none other than Naru Uzumaki Namikaze, and Menma Uzumaki Namikaze. The pride and joys of both Minato and Kushina. However despite this happy moment both Minato and Kushina couldn't help but feel like something or rather someone was missing.

And that someone happened to be Naruto, their eldest son.

Naruto was a small and skinny child. He had his fathers eyes and hair, but had his mothers face. The only thing he wore was plain white T-shirt accompanied by black shorts and black sandals. Overall young Naruto looked very different from his younger siblings.

Menma was practically a carbon copy of Naruto the only differences being he was a few inches taller than Naruto, his body was healthy, his eyes were a deeper shade of blue, and his hair was red just like their Mother. From his elbow down he had duck tape wrapped around his arms except for his fingers, he wore a black tank top covered by a black long sleeved jacket, Anbu styled pants, kunai holster on his left thigh, and regular shinobi styled sandals.

Naru was basically a copy of Kushina when she was younger. Her hair came down to her back, her eyes were a nice violet shade just like her Mothers. She wore a dark red short sleeved kimono top with black shorts, she had a kunai holster on her left thigh just like her brother, and the regular shinobi sandals.

While the family were enjoying themselves and overall having a great time, their older brother/son looked on from the confines of his bedroom. 'Why do they forget me' was the little boy's only thought. Naruto watched as Minato and Kushina chased after his brother and sister all the while laughing.

Now don't get him wrong he loved it when his family spent time together, he just wished he was included in those events. But even though he loved watching his family laugh and have fun together, he couldn't help but feel a bit jealous. 'How come I'm never included' he wondered to himself. Naruto would always look for that answer, and when he looked he couldn't help but subconsciously reflect on his life.

'Naruto was a very well behaved boy, he rarely asked his parents for anything. And when he did ask them for something, they would either forget or ignore him. But despite all this negligence he didn't hate his family, I guess he could just never bring himself to actually hate them. Because I guess in a way he held onto the ideal of what a family is, and hoped that eventually they would come around and spend time with him. However after each day it seemed like that time would never come.

Besides his parents he also had trouble with his younger siblings. His younger brother and sister would belittle him in front of other children, blame him for things he didn't do, take credit for anything that he did, and encourage others to pick on him. A good example of this is, when they pulled pranks or accidentally broke something they would blame it on Naruto. However the worst part is his parents wouldn't even let him explain what had happened, instead they would just yell at him and send him to his room.

Despite not asking for much there was one thing Naruto always asked for, training. Everyday Naruto would ask his parents for training but they would either make up excuses, ignore him, or just tell him "No". The excuses they would use weren't even good. They would say things like "we'll start your training when you enter the academy" or "we're to busy training your siblings" and other stuff like that.

After constantly being told such excuses, he had soon learned to stop asking his parents for training. So instead he went to Kakashi, his fathers only living student for training. But surprise he was just like his father, telling him to wait till he enters the academy or that his siblings training was more important. The same happened with his "Godparents. Neither Tsunade nor Jiraiya wanted anything to do with him, instead they only focused on his younger siblings and their training. And when he would press the issue of training, his parents would yell and send him to his room.

However this abuse wasn't just exclusive to his family, he was practically abused by the entire shinobi force. The only exceptions being the clan heads, Gai, Asuma, Kurenai, Hiruzen, the Anbu, and the entire Uchiha clan. While the shinobi's chose to mock and ridicule him, the civilians would just ignore him.

The only time they would yell at him or raise a hand to strike him was when he said things like being the fourth Hokage's eldest son. However those moments were very rare. But despite being ignored by the civilians, there were a few exceptions. There was Nanari the librarian, the ichuraku family and most of the civilian council and their children. The only civilian he had a problem with was a girl named Sakura Haruno.

She was just like all the others, she would mock him and sometimes hit him. He did however take solace in the fact that her parents like him. They would constantly talk to her about being kind to others. However it seemed those lessons were in vain, as she would constantly harass and harm him whenever they met.

However despite all this, the abuse, the neglect, the ridiculing, despite all of that he still didn't *hate* his family. He was just sad and angry that they ignored him, and seemingly didn't want him in their life.'

He shook his head bringing himself out of his thoughts and turned away from the window, and went back to reading his book that Kurenai had gotten him for his birthday last year.

*one hour later *

After about and hour of reading, Naruto looked up closing his book and at the clock. It seemed like he had missed dinner, and he doubted/knew they wouldn't have saved any for him. So he just shut his book and turned off my light, and went to sleep.

What Naruto didn't know is that come tomorrow morning his life would be changed forever.
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