39) Waist-Deep In Walmart

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Title: Waist-deep in Walmart

Author: XxSkater2Girl16xX

Category: Teen Fiction

Rating: PG-13

Description: "As I sat on the toilet, I realized how badass I was being. First of all, I (kind of) broke into Walmart; Second, I was (kind of) plotting to steal toilet paper; and third, I was doing all this while a hurricane was brewing outside."

Ellie wanted a quick trip to Walmart to buy some toilet paper for her mom. A minute in, a minute out. Instead, she got locked in. With her secret love, of course.

Review: Well I have to admit, this is the first story I read in which the place where everything happens, isn't at school or something, which is good. I mean finally xD

The storyline is awesome. She gets locked in Walmart with Anthony, her crush. He's sooo adorable!!! I wanted to hug him everytime he spoke and pinch his cheeks and hug him again and kiss him and- okay I think you get the idea so I'll stop now *smiles awkwardly*.

I awed so much while reading this :p He's such an awesome person, he's sweet, he's charming, he's a gentleman, he's just sooo amazing :)

I wish I can find my own Anthony *pouts*.

Ellie on the other hand... Well I love her!!! Like really love her!!! Her fear of aliens and ghosts is hilarious, I couldn't stop chuckling to myself all the time  xD

The moment she caught sight of Anthony when the electricity was screwed or turned off or whatever, she screamed 'ghost ghostttt'. Her reactions are awesome xD

And Anthony loves to tease her about it and make her so scared she would scream xD

And all those lies about university and her age and all made the story even funnier but I'm not telling you the reason, you'll have to read the story to find out. Sorry not sorry. cx

All in all, the story was great... I won't lie I'm still in the process of reading it but so far everything is awesome about it and I would definitely read it more than once I assure you guys :)


Okay I think that's my cue to leave lovelies,

Happy reading,


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