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Neil:doctor...avni kaisi hai

Doctor:i m sorry lekin abhi hum kuch keh nahi sakte..operation toh successful raha but still she is critical...voh humare kisi bhi treatment ko respond hi nahi kar rahi hai...aisa lagta hai ki voh jeena hi nahi chahti...jaise ki unke paas jeene ki koi vajah hi nahi hai...hum apni puri koshish karenge dono ko bachane ki...

All gets confused hearing this

Bebe:dono?

Doctor:haa...unko aur unke bacche ko...

Shocked would be an understatement for all..

Doctor leaves from there....

Neil(shocked):avni pregnant hai

They hear a voice saying

Voice:haa...voh pregnant hai

All turns and finds kareena standing there....

She comes towards them

Maddy:kareena...tumhe pata tha ki avni pregnant hai

Kareena:haa maa..mujhe aur super bhabhi ko aaj subah hi pata chala jab hum checkup ke liye gaye the...

Bebe:phir hume bataya kyun nahi...

Kareena:bebe voh maine super bhabhi ko bola tha ki neil bhai ko call karke bata de lekin unhone kaha ki voh unhe surprise dena chahti hai...aur yeh baat voh sabse pehle neil bhai ko hi batana chahti thi isliye unhone aap logo ko nahi bataya...voh  toh subah kitni khush thi phir achanak se yeh sab kaise ho gaya...

Guilt was killing neil from inside...he was blaming himself for her condition...he stumbles and sat with thud on floor on his knees....all tries to console him but he was only remembering his moments with avni....then he remember doctor saying

"Aisa lagta hai ki voh jeena hi nahi chahti..jaise ki unke paas jeene ki koi vajah hi nahi hai"

Neil(whispers):avni

Tears were continuously rolling down his cheeks...

Bebe:neil...sambhal apne aap ko...kuch nahi hoga avni ko aur na hi tere bacche ko...

But he was lost in his own world

And then he remembers soniya's words saying

"Jaise maine apne pyaar ko yaane tumhe khoya hai theek vaise hi tum bhi apne pyaar ko kho doge..dekh lena Mr.neil khanna...u will also lose ur love just like me"

Neil(shouts):noooo

Shweta(teary eyes):neil

Neil:mom...mom plz aap avni ko bolo na ki mujhe maaf karde....main aaj se usse koi bhi baat nahi chupaunga...aap bolo na use ki mujhe itni badi saza na de...

Bebe:neil...kuch nahi hoga avni ko...sambhal apne aap ko...

But he was behaving like a mad person begging for his love...

Neil:bebe...bebe aap avni ko bolo na...voh aapki baat kabhi nahi taalegi...main....main nahi reh sakta uske bina....main mar jaunga bebe...main mar jaunga apni avni ke bina...mujhe...mujhe bas meri avni chahiye...aap...aap bolo na use ki mujhe chodkar na jaye..bebe...avni...

His words came to a halt as bebe slapped him to bring him back in his senses...

Neil looks at bebe with so much pain in his eyes...bebe makes him stand and hugs him...and he finally broke down in her arms...

Bebe:shhh...kuch nahi hoga teri avni ko...humari avni bahot strong hai...aur ab uske liye tujhe bhi strong rehna hoga neil....tu aise tut nahi sakta.....

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