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Instead of a character who looks dangerous but is harmless or a character who looks harmless but is dangerous, it should be character who looks dangerous, and they are, but for a completely different reason than they should be.

Not like "guy who wears water robes is actually fire wizard." More like "seven foot tall mountain of gleaming muscle with a sword the size of a surfboard strapped on his back is actually the Nine Realms most feared lawyer."

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