BOOK SUGGESTIONS/ CRITICIZE FOR FREE! II

The Creation of a Madman

Dear EmilyCharlotteCooledge,

I'll be honest... this book was hard to critique. :)

The style of your writing is so clear and easy-to-read that I truly had trouble trying to find anything that needs editing. The pace is fantastic and I like the vocabulary. You're also very consistent in grammar and punctuation.

I think the only major edit is the description--it's very long! Try to make it shorter.

Wow wow wow!!

At the first chapter, I had become super nervous, and I already felt super attached to this child! The description is just too good. It's addicting to read.

Awesome job!

~J

Date: 15 December 2014