The Prince arrives

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This is the Abecedarian poem I've been working on all month. I'm out of time so I post it now. I've broken my own golden rule of posting a poem I'm not completely happy with. Still I hope you enjoy the poem as it is.

Awaiting another arrival again
Beautiful baby boy began
Cute calm cuddly child
Dreaming desiring dreading defiled
Eloquent eyes ever evident
Family, friends faithfully frequent

Giving grateful glorious glamour
Helping herald happy humour
Investing innocent intimacy intently
Joking jumping jabbering jointly
Kindly keeping kissing keen
Laughing loudly lucky lean

Mothers man maybe make
Nan nevermind no namesake
Over old olive option
Plying pure protective potion
Quiet quelled quickly quite
Reacquainting royal ritual rite

Singing solefully silly sounds
Through tribal testament touchdowns
Uttering euphemisms until unable
Various vapours visibly veil
Women wale wildly whereto
Xtra xpto xtra xpto

Yelling yelping yelding youthfulness
Zero zigzag zestless zaniness

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Asking as I often do on this line
Before you leave this page of mine
Can you comment a word or two
Do you have a suggestions or few
Every thought would be valued
For this was a tricky style viewed
Going with alliteration made it harder
However I hope you like this charmer
Indeed if you don't still let me know
Just curious for your thoughts below
Keen to know you see I’m bold
Leaving silently leaves me cold
Maybe I've mentioned this before
No real problem if you do for sure
Only there's many hours invested  here
Purely because of its difficulty dear
Quietly I await your decisive bends
Resting now as this month ends
So tomorrow it will be March
Trying a Blitz poem then for a blast
Undertaking that will be so much harder
Very interesting style that's read faster
Will you paint my little star orange
Xerox only after asking without cringe
You know you probably won't need pleading
Zero left for me to say except thanks so much for reading
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