Trovenia - The Birth of Adventures
By
CTFires
I'm getting straight into saying this! Author, is a genus, such a unique story. I've never read anything like it, ever!
The imagination that has gone into this is beautiful, really well outside if the box idea and I'm in love with the main character and Fox!
Pirate and Fox!! Like seriously! Genus!
Anyhow, I noticed some minor grammar errors and misplaced words but some words I do believe are how pirates talk!
My main pet hate, dialog...
Please, I beg look into this. As you have your dialog running side by side, no indication who is speaking and how its spoke. You do notice the main characters voice changes by the actions of those around her, although, this dialog setting isn't the greatest to have in your story.
The storyline is well written, conducted and executed, it keeps you pulled in. I'm not fond of lengthy paragraphs, however as long as there's a new paragraph for a change of character, surrounding or action while moving from one place into another I seen no harm. (Published Novels do have lengthy paragraphs, so no wrong doing here). Nevertheless, new paragraph between dialog will help readers glide through without issues or confusions.
I truly love this opening, its beautiful but surrounding areas could do with a little description, as well as characters as they are minor or none existing.
Authors Note; Keep you the unique quality it is refreshing.
Question; Did you draw your cover?
I highly recommend this story, it uniqueness is mind blowing.
Dont forget to vote and check this story out.
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