For your overall rating, I would give you an eight out of ten.
You're title goes very well along with the plot and the cover is very beautiful!
As for your plot, it is very well done and something that I really enjoy, which is hard to find in a Lucaya book.
The only thing that I feel you can improve on is your grammar like how it was in the last one. Like I said before, grammarly is free and works wonders!!
I hope this helped!!