I was having the best day of my life. The giant war was over and we had won. I was with the woman of my dreams and i was going to propose. I had to do a lot of work for makeing the ring and getting Athena's blessing. She made me go through the Twelve Labors of Hercules and once I finished i had to craft the ring. But with Hephestu's help it was amazing. It was a Gold ring with a blue dimond in the middle and green emralds laceing it and if If i say so my self it looked amazing there. But there was one little problem everyone but a select few at camp hated me thanks to my new half brother Coper. The select few who still liked me were Nico, Annabeth, Thalia, the other 7, and (suprisingly) Clarisse. Here I'll tell you what happened to make everyone hate me.
I saw a half blood running into camp he had no wepon no nothing to protect him and chaseing him was of course the Minitor so I got riptide out of my pocket and i went and fought the minitor while the kid cowered behind a tree. The kid could not have been more then 9 years old. And so I went to work istabbed and missed the minitor charged and I rolled out of the way and then stabed again and he was redused to a pile of sand. Then the kid did something unexpected he came up to me and grabed my sword and said " Yea I defeated the minitor while this guy cowered behind a tree." Of course Nico comes out of nowhere and scares the crap out of me then we both said no i did it and then the campers said " You know its not cool to steal someones light." But i didnt I said and then the kid kicked me in the shin and threw my sword on the ground and went with the other campers. But before he could get far Dad flashed in and said "Coper you are my son and since you have defeated the minitor without any training i will grant you one wish." Coper said " Dad can you make me 17?" Dad said "wish granted" and then flashed out. After that Coper made my life hell he made pranks and blamed them on me and so that is pritty much it.
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But today he cant ruin today it was to perfect and amazing. Boy was I wrong. I told Annabeth to meet me by the by the beach in an hour. So an hour passed and I went to the beach I looked over and ther was a couple kissing and i thought it was an aphrodite girl and some other guy so I went to go say hi and see if the had seen Annabeth and when I got closer I relized something. That is Annabeth with my ass clown of a half brother and I raged. I Yelled "ARE YOU F****** KIDDING ME I DID EVERYTHING FOR YOU I SAVED YOUR A** I DONT KNOW HOW MANY TIMES. HELL I FELL INTO F****** TARTAROUS FOR YOU TARTAROUS AND THIS IS HOW YOU REPAY ME I WAS GOING TO PROPOSE TO YOU I LOVED YOU!!!!!!!!!!" Then I threw the ring at her and then she said"Wait Percy its not what you think-""save it i said how about you two keep sucking face now since i know now you have been doing it behind my back" and with that I ran and then chiron said I was needed at Olympus.....
This is my first time ever doing this tell me how im doin. THX