#4 - Life Without Death

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When the sun touches the horizon

And the moon kisses the sky

How the dark overflows the world,

Like a sea of black ink

The fear controls me, like a rope around my neck

The empty feeling inside is for me the only thing that exists

Soulless wandering through life, without a will or purpose

No door has been opened for me

Every light fades out when I enter

Not for long will I be lost

Death will take me away from this life without a will

This life without death

The life I remorse

My view:

It's a poem about suicide, I notice now.

"The fear controls me, like a rope around my neck

The empty feeling inside is for me the only thing that exists"

And,

"Soulless wandering through life, without a will or purpose"

That's pretty damn sad. And it scares me. These poems are written about feelings deep inside my heart. (That sounds really cheesy, but I hope you get what I'm trying to say).

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