OK so... THANK YOU EVERYONE WHO VOTED AND COMMENTED OR BECAME A FAN! I didn't actually get five votes but I got three new fans, piss_off, juliaisgay and ReaganGray so I though I'd be nice and post this. :)(I'm really excited, i've got FIVE fans AND I'm on page 19 of What's Hot :D)
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The Threads of Our Lives by tingtamtam © 2010
The threads of our lives,
To never be slit.
Our hearts inside,
Like candles lit.
The songs that we sang,
To never forget.
Our love inside,
Like times we regret.
The memories we hold,
To never be lost.
Our reminders inside,
Like paths we crossed.
The love of our lives,
To never stutter.
Our joy inside,
Like butterflies flutter.
The peace that we felt,
To never be gone.
Our lives inside,
Like the gorgeous dawn.
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I rather like this one :) Though I didn't know what to name it so 'The threads of our lives' it will be unless someone can help?
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