I Need Help!

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When I wrote this, I made a ton of mistakes. I'm still new to this whole writing thing, so I wanted to ask this.

Can you guys, if so, comment anything that may have confused you. I'm currently getting Hide and Seek proofread by an editing company but I also want to change some parts before I make it paperback in a few months. So please let me know what I could've changed or added. I know one was definitely giving Emily a description.

I got a chance to reread it again a few weeks ago and I changed some things. I hate rereading my work tbh. Makes me cringe...

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