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Pein's daughter (a naruto fanfic) [Undergoing Major Editing]

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Kitori was very young when she was separated from her parents. She was taken in by Rin Nohara and her children, from Konohagakure. Her birth parents find that she is in a safer area then with them, as they aren't the best of people, and decide to co...

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by ThatR34llyW3irdGirl

by ThatR34llyW3irdGirl

So after reading this comment, I realize, I have too many pages, and not enough chapters.

I'm going to take this entire book down, and re-do it. I'm just un-publishing it, and editing some things, deleting some authors notes. Ya know, all that stuff.

And I deleted this comment so I wouldn't go looking for it. And I blocked out the name and profile, just so you would get hate from the 53k other people who do like this story. [[You know who you are]] just because I'm not that type of person. ((Btw: I think you need to work on your placement of periods and comma's))

I'm un-publishing it after this goes up, and I will leave this up. I will try and keep you guys updated on how far I've fixed things on my wall. So check there periodically. I'm sorry that this book is pathetic and trash. I'll try to make it better..