mc the marysue pt.2

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Lets have an example...

Day 1: mc cries because her favourite drink ran out at the store

Day 2: mc cries because she can't get the latest phone/ designer shoes

Day 3: mc cries because she couldn't get a reservation at her fave restaurant.

Day 4: mc cries because....you know what i mean.

Anyway, the main point is that mc cries over really trivia and useless things, this makes her soooo WEAK AND PATHETIC if the author wrote her to be this way for sympathy well then mc ain't getting no shit from me. Also she's ,as some might call it, a crybaby (where my Melanie Martinez fans attttt)

Not only that, there are those mc where she has a boyfriend In those shes normally portrayed as...

1) the 'cute' one(written as cute but comes off as annoying) For example:
Bf: hey babe want to try some of this ice cream
Mc: *in high pitch, baby voice* noooo I'll get so fattttttt. Nooooooooo*pouty face* (imagine this scene every time they go out)
(Me as bf: *breaks up with mc and runs*)

2) slut mc( although written as an 'independent women' she always needs to be with guys)
For example:
Le female best friend: hey mc want to watch a movie?
Mc: is my bf or any other guy going? Not that i care cause i is strong and i need no man
Le female best friend: no
Mc: oh then im not going.

3) horrible life mc(tragic like really tragic past)

Mc: my mum died,my dad died, my brother died, my best friend died, my sister died, my uncle died,my aunt died, my whole family died and no one loves me
*mc meets le bf(who probs has a similar dead fam situation to hers)*
Mc: lolololol life is perfect
(did she forget her fam died?!)

See what i mean? These are all annoying, marysue like, pure cringe and cliche mc.

Author's note:  my amazing readers go check out @houseviharika books they're not at all cliche(basically the main thing i look for in every book)and are very original.
(your so welcome vi:))

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